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Jul 2020

I do it get that some people may be offended, but what else can we compare to that's brown in nature? wood is the only thing that's brown that i can think of that isn't demeaning. other things are dirt and poop lol. i guess we can use animal furs but that seems rude too. im not the best writer so i can't think of a way around it unless you just want to be like "they had dark skin". Which is fine I guess.

It's a great blog that I've known about for a while!
And the articles cover a great range of topics including writing about natural Black hair and eye-shape and a bunch of other things that are helpful for more mindful writing!

Like @alexlcuri07 said, there are so many ways to describe people of color over than using food or objects. That said, you can say their skin is the color of something rather than (insert thing) colored. And to me it’s just lazy. ESPECIALLY referring to black people’s skin as another kind of chocolate. Just don’t.

And as a black woman I find it refreshing when writers use more descriptives to describe our skin. I’ve read some things and it makes me question if the author has ever seen a black person before.

Also, referring to black people and other POC as colored is racist. Also, Hispanic is an ethnicity not a race. You can be Hispanic and also be black, white, native, etc.

Do you remember any specific examples? I just want it for my descriptive library.

To me, I hate: chocolate, mahogany (not a food but I don’t like it lol), espresso, caramel. Words like that. I keep a tab open with a thesaurus when I get stuck. In my story, I have my character describe someone as being the deep brown of a tree. It makes sense for my character but it’s better than saying something like “tree colored person”. I can do some quick research of actual and hilarious examples of what not to do

Try describing the color without addressing it flat out. Establishing dark skin is important for an initial introduction, but then describe how their skin reacts to the environment, or how their hair is styled. Darker skin, especially more melinated skin tends to flash light against it more. There are also a lot of variations to darker skin due to hyper pigmentation. Addressing their hairstyle can also make things more obvious. I have done this before by describing how a character in one of my projects styled her dreads.

Most white characters aren't outright described as white, but their other features are paid more attention to. That can be done for characters of color as well, but with the different features certain races and ethnicities have. It can really improve your writing anyway, as describing how "the glow of the sun glittered across her cheek, cutting a streak across her darkened skin," sounds more interesting than, "she had a deep, caramel coating to her skin in the sun."

Well fair I guess. I think it's one of those things I personally wouldn't do just because it's not something I would think to just naturally, but I wouldn't blink if someone else did it.

"Her skin was the color of a poorly plastered wall."

^^ slightly off topic, but I think it's funny.

I've heard "milky white" and "chocolate brown" used to describe skin tones before. Is it really, ahem,

Problematic?

It doesn't seem that offensive, at least to me.

From what I've heard, the use of food as a descriptor of skin tones (for POC) has roots in fetishization and it can also feel dehumanizing. I have definitely read more examples of food being used as a descriptor for characters of color than for white characters. I also would have to assume it just feels like a tired and overused trope from white writers who may not even listen to the stories of POC to influence their stories.

It's one of those things where you can do it if you want, but some people are going to dislike it and find it offensive. That can be confusing to a lot of white people (I speak in general as some on here are not), but it also isn't something white people encounter as much in writing, nor do they live with the ramifications it can have in the real world (i.e. fetishizing especially with black women).

I don't think it's racist, because I don't think anybody does it with the intent of being racist or of offending anyone, and honestly I think I makes it easier for readers who don't have a rich knowledge of colors and color variations, but it's still really overdone and cliche...