Please, I have no desire to beat a dead horse. Most of this thread has been pointing out bad writing, and in some cases, how to fix it. Check my posting history on this, or any other forum, and I am constantly offering advice where needed. I have done more script and comic review/critiques in the last two months than I can count, and have another two scripts in my inbox to go through, in addition to the two that have been submitted for publication on my site. I'm involved in two different comic script swap rings for the very purpose of helping people. I've even written three scripts for people for free in the last 6 weeks. My writing might not be the best in the world, but my knowledge of writing techniques and skills is something that I pass out freely to anyone who wants it, in addition to pointing them in the right direction for additional resources. I do my part, and more. Anyone who has dealt with me can tell you that I am generous with my time, resources, and skills.
And please don't twist my words around. When all else fails, the best thing to do, if you want to create comics, is find someone who has skills you lack. I'm unable to draw to the level of consistency that my OCD requires for a comic, and that is after countless hours trying to develop the skill, with some very good artists trying to help. I can draw a nice, pleasing face, and make money off of selling it, but not the same face from different angles without photographic references. Just a skill that I have never been able to master. I don't sweat it, I simply find ways to cover my weakness, which includes the advice I gave above.
If there's more to be said, can we please take it to PM?
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(Sorry for the topic derail)