@ReroOnyx If I may pitch in a little (though I probably won't be that helpful 
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@Mid25 (this is my first review/critique, and I'm kinda an ass, so sorry if it's too harsh)
I read through your comic, and in my opinion, you have a decent idea and you seem to know where you want to go with it.
That said, I feel its suffering a little in the execution, your art is pretty solid, (personally the cel shading throws me a little, it makes it look like its made with 3d models, which if that's what you're going for that's good.) but I think the poses, expressions and some panels are letting it down.
Poses: most of the poses "feel" stiff (which is kinda hard to stop) and awkward, for example in Chapter 2 page 17 Kenta running looks very, odd. It looks like he's about to face plant. That being said, I do like some of them like chapter 2 page 25, the last panel and Chapter 3 page 13, the last panel again are my favourites. They feel pretty natural and capture the mood.
Expressions: I find the expressions are, a little, lacking in lieu of a better word. Maybe all that's need is some more detail? I'm not really sure how to describe it. I would suggested some expressions studies though, practice never hurts
Panels: The one main panel that I noticed, which is Chapter 2 page 18, when Kenta landing and running to the door.
A few things you could do to improve panels like would be
A. maybe instead of saying "read left to right" you could draw it from the other side? Doing this the way you have breaks the flow.
Or B. You could make this panel really dynamic and exciting, perhaps something like;
Not the best example I know, but hopefully you understand what I mean.
And back to stiff poses, that last one pretty stiff, so like everyone does it, just keep reworking it till is bearable :3
That's pretty much it, I hope this helps. (And again, sorry if it's harsh)
