Boba Wants to Read and Review Some Comics!

Lucca_Vendramel 2019-06-15 15:28:14 UTC #11

In the far away future, a girl lives peacefully in the planet of Juuna with her family. Maybe too peacefully, since her mundane routine brings her to do something that would put her and those close to her in a lot of danger.
Probably something cute but tough, like Warturtle or Croconaw

Thanks for this! Please read all of the chapters since I've gotten much feedback that I applied since the first chapter.

Kayas_Kosmos 2019-06-15 16:43:27 UTC #12

Ooh this sounds cool! Okay here's mine:

An Overwatch Story. The first omnic ever created is stolen during one of King's Row's worst riots in recent memory. Now this tiny little contraption must try to survive a war-torn nightmare in order to return an angel's halo that was stolen alongside him, the question is can he survive?

(Oh dear I'm not familiar enough with Pokémon to know). I know Humphrey would run a mile from a Pokémon like Butterfree since he's not a fan of moths... despite the fact that they follow him everywhere. I'd imagine he would be quite the fan of any Pokémon that radiates copious amounts of light since he is nyctophobic.

AilyneGouveia 2019-06-15 18:07:51 UTC #13

Oh ! Maybe i will finaly get a feedback !

So here is my my little contribution

Well, it's a story about mafia, i realy like the 1920s - 30s vibes.
For now I'm at the beginning of the plot, it's not my job and I can only work on my comic book during my free time.
but i realy hope that you will enjoy it !

And for the last question : I don't see any pokemon who would fit my protagonist, sooo...
Charizard ! Just because it remember me my childhood ^.^

Pencilz 2019-06-15 18:16:38 UTC #14

This sounds fun! I've actually thought about making Pokemon teams for my main characters before.

A comic following the Caraways, a team of five sibling explorers who set out to investigate the mysteries surrounding their hometown in eldritch New England. From old temple ruins to secret societies, strange artifacts, and even planes from beyond the waking world, some of the most disturbing things the kids uncover lie in their hidden connection to it all. Tread carefully.

Some Pokemon the kids might have:

Cynthia:

Cori:

Matilda:

Caleb:

Zoe:

AmazementComics 2019-06-15 19:10:50 UTC #15

Four fruits get mutated and turn into ninjas who patrol New York City and form powerful allies. They will also learn how to navigate the ways of becoming the heroes they were meant to be.

Pokemon?

Apple- Charizard
Orange- Pikachu
Pineapple- Blastoise
Pear- Mewtwo

CiciEnixa 2019-06-16 04:39:20 UTC #16

All right, we'll be cutting off here. I'll be posting the first few reviews in a couple hours, so do expect them soon. Again, this will be a casual thing.

Oh, by the way, remember when I asked for your main character's Pokemon? You'll see the real reason why soon as well. The bad news is for those that have a lot of main characters and/or mentioned a lot of Pokemon, we're only gonna pick 1 or 2. Because that is a LOT.

Oso050 2019-06-16 05:13:30 UTC #17

Would be interesting hearing someone talk about this

chocolatteboss 2019-06-16 05:56:34 UTC #18

Okay here's mine:

Sami kidnaps the baby princess and takes her to Madam Safa, a lady who cares for many children, none of which are her own. There, Sami raises the princess as Masa, telling the girl she is his little sister. Years later, Sami has disappeared without a trace, leaving Masa heartbroken as to why her beloved brother abandoned her. Then she finds out the truth. Masa has to choose between fighting for a throne she doesn't want or searching for the man who lied to her.

i think Masa would go with Eevee

CiciEnixa 2019-06-16 06:10:11 UTC #19

First up, Hue Are You? by @Rodimus13

What we liked:

A good sense of using contrast to emphasize light and shadow as well as clearly tier-ing the elements from foreground to background. This is particularly for the Grey Zone. Many B&W comic creators are hesitant about playing with contrast, but yours is very well done!
Such expressive robots <3 We expected it from Build-a, but seeing the Red and Blue bots be strict yet with their own distinct personalities brought a smile to Boba's face.
The repeated question "Hue are you?", and everyone being color-coded to determine their allegiance is very clever. Particularly Build-a and Query and everyone within the Grey Zone being a neutral party by being literally neutral in color.
There's always something rather creepy and haunting whenever we see traces of what was left of humanity. It really brings us back to the fact that the humans seem to be gone, but their mark still persists after all this time.
A++ on the Tramsformers sequences! How long do those typically take to draw? They look awesome! We also love those little sequences when the bots are being first built, such as Build-a's birthday.
Query is Boba's fave. Query acting as the Big Sis/Mama for Build-a (particularly for the "Go recharge!" line) just cements how delightful she is!
Do bots dream of electric sheep? Maybe not, but the dreams of colored doors and the "people" really spring up some things we may need to question. It really makes me wonder why those dreams exist, because they don't seem to be the type bots should experience at all.
Seeing Build-a just being so nice and taking up leadership roles is fun to see.
Boba's thoughts on the creation of Jump-Bot XD
Despite the bleak state of the world, there's a lot of humor abound amongst the bots and that really brings a light to this universe. Your characters are built well and their personalities really shine through.

Would recommend to anyone who likes sweet robots, Transformers, underlying intriguing plots, and something delightful to read.

Thank you for sharing to us such a wonderful comic!

Eveeka 2019-06-16 09:37:41 UTC #20

When dangerous creatures called Shadows attack the Forest Kingdom and kill the queen, the young prince, Gother, must escape to the world of humans. He meets a girl named Violetta. This is just the beginning of their dangerous adventure...

Pikachu or Charizard because I' don't know any other pokemon xD

CiciEnixa 2019-06-16 10:51:13 UTC #21

Next up, Ivolice and the Emissaries by @KoreanTacos

What we liked:

Boba LOVES Magical Girls so you're already hitting a sweet spot there XD
Sango and Kirara haha <3 Boba thought the third cat would be named like, Shippo or Miroku or something along that line. We're also rather delighted to find out they're all your actual cats.
From the first few scenes alone, we're able to get a good idea on the type of person Ivolice is, which is pretty good! While that includes tuning out people lecturing or giving long exposition to her (hahaha), she is still a sweet girl and you're able to show that she's kind and helpful whether directly (recommending to customers while off duty) or indirectly (waving to child on bus).
Speaking of, you have a lovely amount of unique background characters and Boba is always impressed when creators such as yourself bring these background characters to life. Even from a glance, you can tell they're not just idle generic folks pasted in the background. Each of them are their own person, going about their day.
"It’s not like any life altering events are going to happen between now and the time I finish school...” Ah yes, I, too, enjoy tempting the Universe.
Gonna be real honest, we dove into this comic thinking "lighthearted funny magical girl adventure"... and was absolutely unprepared for Silent Hill shenanigans, from the ominous introduction of the fog to the "statues" to the hulking beast of a man CLEAVING said "statues" (we legit went OHSH**!) But you know what? Absolute props to that. It really established the urgency and danger to expect from here on in.
Thank you for the absolutely gorgeous magical girl transformation, always glad to see the classics!
Eventually Ivolice will run out of animals to call Piko and she will have to refer to him by name... eventually XD
If Leo, Emissary of Naptime becomes an actual thing, I will laugh like there's no tomorrow.
We're still early into the story it seems, but we thoroughly enjoyed the story so far and can't wait for more. One thing Boba quite liked is Ivolice's way of dealing with the problems at hand. Even if at first she didn't quite believe what's going on, she understood that the risks of being an Emissary are very real and broke down to tears. Not many heroes acknowledge how they feel about the dangers they face because HECK I GET MAGIC POWERS ANYWAY THAT'S COOL and it's honestly interesting to see this side.

Would recommend to anyone who likes the magical girl genre, small furry friends (most are cats, one is a magical unidentified talking buff rodent of sorts), well-developed characters, and danger fog (PSA: Don't tell fog people with cleavers that you're gonna call the cops. It won't end well.)

Thank you for this lovely comic, hope to see more!

KoreanTacos 2019-06-16 11:06:23 UTC #22

Thank you very much. I like subtle details, so Im always happy when people notice them in my work.

Rodimus13 2019-06-16 11:20:40 UTC #23

We have been asked soo many times "Soooo when is a human showing up?" or my favorite when they went to the other factory ".... THERE IS BLOOD? WHY IS THERE BLOOD?!". Folks just don't seem to believe that there are no humans left anywhere.

Hubby says..... way too long but he loves transformers. He really appreciates all the art comments (and on Father's Day no less!)

Yeeeeeessssss someone gets it! Query has been declared "best girl" by many.

Just about everything is on purpose in the comic. Even the fluffy arcs have something to show. Most folks don' give the dreams enough attention.

I really worry about this a lot as the writer of this team. I try to make each character "real". I'm glad it shows.

Also, we love the artwork! Hope Rotom does not accidentally possess her!

CiciEnixa 2019-06-24 03:25:59 UTC #24

Next we have The Broken Ones by @kaetana

Before anything else, I think of the three main-ish characters, only Captain Bree has been named in-comic so far. I did find the other names in one of the comments but not specifically who Rowan or Raul are, so thank you for the Pokemon hint because I think I definitely know who's who now XD (I knew this Pokemon thing was a great idea lol). Let's jump in!

What we liked:

Your art is BEAUTIFUL. Actually, the little thumbnail on the link alone looks pretty epic already, and I'm SO glad to see that it's just as epic and gorgeous in the actual pages! There's so much attention put on the character designs, the clothes (sorry, Boba loves well-thought out and beautifully-made fashion for the characters).
The chapter covers based off of tarot cards is so cool. Boba and I are very sorry that we don't know them as well as we hope, but we love that you planned these out and I'm sure if you have readers that know these a lot better, they can infer what's to come in the chapter. From what we could guess, Chapter 1 is The Magician, Chapter 2 is... The Empress? If this is a minor arcana then maybe one of the Wand cards, but otherwise, not sure. And Chapter 3 is The High Priestess (which I thought was the Moon card at first but I think definitely the High Priestess).
The lighting is lovely, especially the tubes and all the different sorts of magic like the barriers and the lightning and the psy powers!!! And your night scene! It's just so well done!
Captain Bree is the most gorgeous and most delightful character hahaha, and also, her entire crew is Boba every morning, just not wanting to do anything XD
A main problem most artists have with a lot of characters is they begin to look very similar to each other, but you absolutely do not have that problem. Seriously, you have so many characters and your cast is so diverse, and that's only on the first chapter!
Rowan is so badass and so OP, but we're glad to see from a story standpoint that his abilities do have some significant limits. He is clearly strained after the fight, and mind-controlling someone definitely is not without consequence to the owner of the body. He might be dead at this point. He probably is. RIP that guy.
The little anchor choker. It's just really cute XD
Raul seems like the kind of guy that would go the most roundabout way to do something for the sake of presentation. He has it absolutely nailed, though, to be fair.
Boba, however, almost doesn't want to call him a very good thief considering the high amount of gold wastage in that one chase scene lol
Darrak doesn't even really try to go after the thief or Bree but... he "tried". Sort of XD And that's something we can all live by.

Would recommend to anyone who likes DnD, awesome magics, thief shenanigans, and cool fights.

We really enjoyed this one, thank you!

kaetana 2019-06-24 04:09:42 UTC #25

Aaaaah thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And oh my goodness the drawing is so sweet, thank you for that. I am grinning ear to ear right now haha.

Yay! I really enjoy character and costume design, and I sometimes worry that having to simplify designs a bit so that I can survive drawing them over and over in the comic ends up making them less interesting. Glad to hear they work well!

Chapter 2 is The Fool, and you totally got the other two!

Thank you again for such a lovely and in-depth review, and the wonderfully cute artwork!

CiciEnixa 2019-08-04 15:29:17 UTC #26

Apologies for the delay, I actually finished reading this a while ago but life stuff happened. Anywho, we're back!

This one is Crystal Crown by @MegaRay and @Sufiatur

What we liked:

Man, right into the inferno we go on our first steps XD
Carlos being all weepy and overdramatic is me whenever I lose sight of my parents for 5 seconds. I’m not even joking, I get lost so easily XD
Poor Stella, maybe she’s just a victim of unfortunate circumstance
You’re very dynamic on your perspectives, which is quite lovely to see!
Cool armor ~ Actually the whole palace looks so cool and futuristic~
The princess looks adorable <3 And sassy hahaha
Damn, a 12 year revenge plan. I can respect that.
Can I just say that the magic ring is surprisingly impressive? Like that thing just shattered a sword!
I’m pretty sure we didn’t see the latest page on our first read, but Carlos and Stella are looking goooood after the time skip <3

Would recommend to anyone who likes sweet protagonists, crazy revenge plotters, magic artifacts and cool fight scenes.

Thank you for this, I hope you make more pages soon because I really want to see this story grow.

MegaRay 2019-08-04 22:55:35 UTC #27

Thank you so much for your encouraging words. And I love the drawing, it's cute

Story of my childhood

MichaelFIGComix 2019-08-04 23:32:23 UTC #28

Hi! I'm Michael! My comic is a B&W style series. It's about a troubled boy named Ubeoky who's also the prince of his race, known as Consumers. Through time he learns to become a better person along with getting prepared to fight evil.

If Ubeoky knew what the pokemon series was. He would like Lucario or Blazkien.

azzy-m 2019-08-05 14:43:26 UTC #30

I know you aren't going to add more comics for review but I thought I'd just drop a link for it anyway.

My comic is about four friends who all carry their own emotional baggage, Marcus, Ryan, Jas and Terry all trying to go through their last year of high school together, and when a mysterious stranger on the internet starts exposing the secrets of everyone they know, well, chaos ensues.

Ah... pokemon, huh. I've never played Pokemon and I've hardly watched any of the shows so I know almost nothing about it. Marcus would probably have a Bulbasaur. Why? Because Bulbasaur is the only other pokemon i know other than Squirtle, Charmander and Pikachu and it's my favorite pokemon. (don't judge me okay, i've never had a DS before because I used to have a PSP)

DruidPeter 2019-08-05 23:37:15 UTC #31

Huh.

So, I don't know if posting is prohibited until you've finished #14? Or you just won't choose from any more in the thread until you get through #14?

Well, either way, here goes nothing:

10 years ago, the Kolldrunn suffered through the 2nd continental war, and then stood in tattered ruins, but with, finally, at last, peace upon the world. Yet... once more stirrings swell from within the deep. Old wounds and nursed grudges begin to fester. Will the children of the past be faced once more to confront the ghosts... of their ancestors? And if so... will a secret even more ancient, and unsettling... be revealed?

I actually have several main characters. But for the big ones:

Rose Nandai: Vulpix
Sara Bhilatskova: Bulbasaur
Voroshilov Rosutin: Parasect!!!