I think the atmosphere in your comic is very well-crafted. You have pretty good drawing skills and character depiction abilities.

keep up the good work! :smiley:

If I had to give some feedback, it would probably be about the distribution of black, white, and gray. In your comic, the proportions of black, white, and gray are quite similar, which makes it hard to find a focal point in some scenes.

This might also be because, in some areas, you’ve already used screentones or hatching to indicate shadows, but then you layered another level of grayscale on top, leading to this effect.