Cat Loaf Comic - Looking for Feedback

[kyutepastry]

Hello! Here's my comic about cat loaf along with other pastry feline characters :3 >>> Cat Loaf Adventures <<<

It just turned 1-month old last week. I've been uploading consistently. So far I have 71 subscribers.

I get decent views (I think?), but there's something that makes people not hitting the subscribe button
I'm wondering if there's anything I could do to improve my content or characters?
What do you guys think about the concept, art or story?

I appreciate any tip, crit, comment, suggestion, feedback etc. Thank you so much!

[BurntSushi]

I'd say it's cute and well done. Perhaps it's Rye-loafs lack of changing expression + lack of movement?
The use of animation is a good touch.
Edit: Like Rye moves in his first comic but every moment since he's been static

[digitalvalium1]

Art style is good. Color sense is good. Use of animation is good. Limited movement to add visual interest. Good show. Concept is a consistent winner. Overall it's unbearably cute. I like it.

Improving on what you have, I think your focus has to be maintaining your art level and focusing on your writing. This kind of series can go stale quickly so multiple characters and a rotating cast can help. Nebulous trials and goals help, but they're cats, so....

Your view to sub ratio is good, and your viewer interaction is good. There's nothing to be ashamed of here. I don't know this kind of strip well, so I can't give specific examples, but increasing viewer interaction and investment is generally key to keeping readers interested, coming back, and talking about your comic outside of the bubble of your comic. I'd research other strips in this genre to see what others have done to be successful. Counting likes and comments is a good indicator of viewer interaction.

[bynuwbis]

@kyutepastry I'm loving Cat Loaf a lot!

It's cute, fresh and entertaining!

I think you're doing really good!

The 6 episodes are consistent so I think you are naturally progressing !

Love the animations you use! They're a great touch!

And you always take the time to respond to comments !

Keep up!

Good luck!

Can't wait to find out what type of cat is the new character !

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[J.Lovelace]

Your comic is only 1 month old, and it has only a hand full of episodes. I think that's pretty okay, all you have to do is just to keep going the way you do.

As for why people may "not hit the subscribe button', well it may be the fact that it's just another slice of life'y comic about cats. There's nothing new except that the cats are loafs and there's some animation to it. Aside that there's been tons of other comics about daily cat life, so you just have to deal with the fact that people are either getting tired of cat comics, or you just have a huge competition in that field to make any breakthrough.

Well, I say that you should just keep going, and the time will tell how well your work will do.

[moradjis]

I`d say that it's pretty cute, I use animation in my comic too FRAMED COMICS , they are a little more complex because I like the whole movement, but the tiny movement that you do are a great touch, besides the animation I really love your comic and style, what do you think about mine?.

By the way I also love cats that why my first comic was about mine <3

[kyutepastry]

@moradjis Wow your animations are great! I'm in love with the cat!! Like you said the animations are more complex but I think it fits the mood of your piece! I also love your second comic too! Really cool!

[kyutepastry]

@digitalvalium1 Yes I agree, I think it can go stale very fast without story arcs, thank you so much for the feedback! I will keep it in mind!

@BurntSushi That might be true, I was trying not to draw too much attention to Rye loaf, since Cat Loaf is all over the place. But Thank you!

@bynuwbis Thank you so much! ^_^ I will keep going and do my best!

@jutawi That's very true, I will keep your feedback in mind, and will keep going! C: