Hey ! That's great ! I can't say much about the story since it's only the beginning but that's interesting so far !
About the art, I like the fact that you take the time to draw environments, most of the time, people will usually abuse of the empty white background without really setting the place and give a sense of presence to their reader.
Honestly I don't have much to say, i'm looking forward to see how everything will evolve !
That's really really minor but some speech bubbles need a bit of cleaning but that's only if you read on PC.
Also, happy birthday !