10 / 167
Feb 2024

Hi, I'd appreciate an more experienced look at my first chapter of you can. Your synopsis leaves me very intrigued so be sure I'll give your novel a read <33

In a Tokyo full of demons, yokai and sadistic villains, only one vigilante is up to the challenge. Too bad she died and her successor is very reluctant high schooler. Kira Vermillion's new task along side high is Defending word from evil forces and keeping her demons at bay.

I'm about to leave for work, but I'ma read yours once I'm back (or possibly if I get bored at work) would you rather me read the prologue or chapter 1? :slight_smile:

Thank you for the thread. The title rings me in (didn't expect other way to sell your soul, tbh) so I subbed. But I haven't read. Just to bookmark in the list so I won't forget. Definitely gonna read.

Here's mine, if you or anyone curious. It's a fantasy and mystery novel:

I remember seeing your post from when you did this once before. I'd never heard of it before, but it's so nice to see people wanting to do something wholesome (literally the opposite of trolling)

Here's mine if you'd check it out, I'd really appreciate it:


(Art by Mariel Leister)

Oh a comic! Ok I'm no comic expert as far as craft goes, but I do love them, so I will provide as qualified feedback as I can haha

Happy to do comics even if I know little about them other than entertainment value haha.

Boy do I wish I could make them though. Always in awe of artists!

I love this idea, we all need a bit of positivity to keep us going!

I have two novels if you have time to check one/both out, that'd be amazing. They are both queer themed but different styles.

If you want actually feedback (the constructive kind) I'll message you here with that info so it's not sitting on your story comments. I'll leave the positivity in the comments, though!

I'm going to start a new wave of reading tomorrow morning. I'll get yours done then!

It's exactly this kind of feedback that I'm looking for, to be able to improve further. I already appreciate your help.

Congratulations on making it to the big 100! I just got done revamping my first few chapters, so I'd like to see what the first one looks like from a newcomer's perspective if you're willing.

Congratulations on 100 subs and thank you for the opportunity!

If you want to check out my fantasy story, here it is in two different formats.
Looking for more feedback on the novel version, but you can read either (or both).

Comic version

Novel version

Thank you for reading and the comment. Means a lot to me :cry_01: Thank you for the positivity, it uplifts the mood :blush:

I'd read yours sometime today :laughing: I'll be back (but in your series' comment)

I love this idea. :heart: If you're into slow burn fantasy romance, I hope you'll give Apparent Secrets a look. :blush: Thank you!

Hey there :slight_smile:

My comic Days left behind just got a new episode.
Check it out!

IT´s a zombie themed survival comic with a twist.

Let me know what you think!

Wish you all a good day and the best of health
Cheers
Mario,

Had a long work day, and have a long weekend a head, so I may be taking a little pause, maybe doing a few here and there. But I won't be stopping! I may just get a little behind. Don't mind a pile building, though :slight_smile: