Here is the review!
-Art-
I really like the soft almost pastel like color you use, goes really well with the story! I do wish the line work was a tad thicker (not by much, just a bit more so line feel a bit more define). I do know the method you use is a style I see in other romantic like comic, so the thicker line is just a personal preference.
I really like that you constantly change the perspective on the character giving the comic a feeling of movement all around. Great expression and love your 'chibi' style for comedy moments!
The only thing that feels a bit off is the backgrounds (mostly the one showing the building) the line look jaggy or pixelated. If you are using sketchup or something similar (background give that feeling) there is nothing wrong with that, but try to make the lines have a similar style to your characters for a bit of consistancy.
-Writing-
I like the amount of text you use, is easy to read but gives enough information. I rarely mention bubbles, but for some reason seeing them cut-off in the border looks a bit weird to me. I understand space can be a bit hard to achieve sometimes but try to keep the speech bubble completed. I seen some slight typos (most with words that use ' ), nothing major though.
I do like the comedy aspect as I laugh quite a bit, but at the same time there is also heavy subject that are mention and I believe you are doing a good balance of everything.
-Paneling-
Can't say much here, you are using the vertical format in a great way, have a really good number of panels and they all have different perspective or look making them all interesting.
-Story-
I got to say you are doing a great story, it had me hook from the start and using the TV for some exposition was a great use as it allow for it to feel natural and at the same time not feel like info dump at a crucial point. Also she using it like background noise like a lot of us do is perfect. I like that you make it easy to know who are important to the story with the gray layout for standby or side character, it make it easy to distinguish and know the important aspect of the story.
You got a really good comic going here! Hope this help you out and hope you continue the great work