Comic composition, my sketch and the colored version

[alesspluss]

This was difficult to do, as my drawing proportions are kinda sh*t . Originally, the monster would grab her face completly, but I think I will do that in another issue...

I like how the monster's weight is done, I wanted to exagerate it, making him like falling in slow motion to the girl.

Notice how they never share eyes in a panel, the first time I made it, the girl was looking at his eyes, but then I realized "no creature makes contact vision if it's scared" that's why she's looking at his chest.

Thanks for reading, here's the comic!

XEREX | Tapas

[silverraven0]

Hi, I see that this is your third topic of the same comic and creating process, but maybe just put your next sketches and all in one already existing topic you've made by using 'REPLY'.

It's not like I want to reprimand you, but since this is your third topic and there is a possibility that there going to be more, it is best to place them all in one place rather than making a bunch of topics for a few pages of your comic.

There's also the other drawing sharing topics that have been created before, like this one particular topic :

Only the last thing you drew! Those are the rules! Go! [image]

Well, have a nice day.

[alesspluss]

uuuups, sorry, I'm new here. Thanks for the help!!!

[A-weird-girler]

The weight balance is a bit off since the girl just looks like she's squatting and not like she's thrusting. Exaggerate the movement of the spine more and place the legs farther so they support her weight. The monster was spot on though, and it directs the viewer's eye quite nicely.

[silverraven0]

No problems, and good luck with your comic!

[alesspluss]

This panel comes after this one

where she stabbed him like 4 seconds, that's why she is like squatting maybe? But yeah, it might be confusing...thanks for the advice, I will do it in the next issues!

[A-weird-girler]

Ah , ok, you're welcome

[alesspluss]

The colour was the best thing of these pannels, she stills in the desert, but somehow I wanted it to be a different place, that's why the "yellow" is on all this section.

Nothing much to say here, the scene when she awakes was too hard to draw, and I decided to remove her eye to make it more "sleepy".

Thanks for reading!

[alesspluss]

I worked a lot on the two corpses, the background color is amazing, a friend helped me to do it. I love how the image isn't dark colored but the scene theme is. That's some contradiction that I loved to experiment