Thanks for reading mine! I've read all your episodes so far for Full Moon King too! I subbed to both the Webtoons and the Tapas version, so I'll definitely get notified when you update next. I also left a comment on your Webtoons one.
Art-wise, I like the black and white with a splash of color that you used in many of the pages. It's striking and stark. There's a bit of inconsistency with regards to when you use them though. Some of your flashback pages were in full color, while some were in black and white. You might want to limit the full color to present day and the black and white pages to flashbacks, just so the reader can better understand when a scene is a flashback and when a scene is present day.
Story-wise, it's an interesting start! A prologue for your character's tragic past. You did a good job in making me curious about what this weakness is that your main character's dad was looking for. I'm sure you'll reveal it eventually, of course!
Other than that, you didn't really reveal much about your character, so I dunno what kind of character he'll be or even his name. Is he gonna be a bitter man, an evil man, a depressed man, a righteous man, a coward? Is he out for revenge, for justice? Is he running from his past or looking for answers to it?
Waiting for more!
