I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply! I got a little swamped with work and my own comic that I forgot to check the thread! I read your comic, Another Time, and subscribed! I actually think the comic has potential!
I like that your main character died early, basically signaling her transition into her new world. It's a good call to adventure, which I always appreciate. You introducing this concept of "Shepards" sounds like an interesting development, which I really liked!
I'm gonna be honest though, other than that, it needs quite a bit of work!
First, you really need to actually name your character! I have no idea who she is, because you haven't given her a name! As a reader, I can't relate to your character, because I don't even know what to call her.
Second, your art is a little chaotic. I think cleaner lines and more defined panels would help a lot with your comic. Also, it feels a little dark, and not in the intentionally dark way either. You just use so much black on black that it becomes kind of muddied. Some more white space would brighten it up considerably and make it easier to read!
That's about it! I actually do like your comic! I wouldn't have subscribed if I didn't. Keep at it, it definitely has potential!!