Comic Script Critique

lucasamerritt 2020-07-09 21:53:31 UTC #1

Hey I'm new here and I was wondering if I could get some critique on my comic script? I've been working on it for a while and I'm not completely satisfied with it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DdaIyVVFODpUDPb0qybw6rP_qdVl7HOR9od3h75GsUQ/edit?usp=sharing

patsyderrell 2020-07-09 23:09:24 UTC #2

Your script is so interesting!

lucasamerritt 2020-07-09 23:33:06 UTC #3

Thank you! What parts do you like about it?

patsyderrell 2020-07-09 23:37:30 UTC #4

What I like about it is the pacing!