I'll come back to this thread as soon as I get back an internet access worthy of such name, because there are already a few of your comics that caught my attention, but they won't load right now...
In the meantime here is my comic. First comic ever, and I'm nowhere near where I want to be in term of art; however I'm so enthusiastic about telling this story that I thought I would use it to practice.
I'd like any constructive critique, I know there is a lot to improve but not necessarily what is a priority/essential to improve versus more minor concerns.