I put a comment on webtoon, but I'll share it here as well.
I think Destiny Oblivion is interesting, I really like the effects and the character design. I'd really like to see where the plot goes but this is a really impactful start, keep going! PS...I like how the main character pops in those three times, it's like watching a trailer.
Here's my series, it's a manga that I hope to print one day.