Comments and Criticism

Inspector_Spinda 2016-03-16 15:44:04 UTC #1

I just started on this site yesterday and I'm hoping to get a few views. I've upload two of my comics, both started around a year ago though I'm still working on both. I'd appreciate comments or critics on either and I'll do my best to return the favor. You can post reviews below or in the comic itself.

Thanks!

http://tapastic.com/series/Moglin-Tales
Adventure Quest fancomic, featuring the moglins (original humanized designs). Mostly slice of life stories. Currently there's only one page because I'm working on coloring the rest in SAI.

http://tapastic.com/series/Mercenary-Inn
Original comic about 4 mercenaries and an amateur mage and their adventures while providing themselves to the world.

sarrowsmith10 2016-03-16 16:17:07 UTC #2

The style is cute and its a good start. Hard to really give feedback when you only have 3 pages up. Keep creating.

bouncyegg 2016-03-16 17:51:09 UTC #3

It's a good start. Just keep creating! My one piece of advice would be to possibly change the font from what looks like Papyrus. It doesn't seem to fit with the content. But that could just be the graphic designer in me.

http://tapastic.com/series/thebouncyegg

Inspector_Spinda 2016-03-16 17:58:16 UTC #4

it's Brandly Hand, I usually use it, but I haven't really given it much thought. What do you suggest I change it into?

Your comic is quite humorous. I relate so much I sort of see what you mean about the text font. it fits quite well in yours

bouncyegg 2016-03-16 18:03:27 UTC #5

I would try to do some of your own lettering. Judging from your other comic, you seem to have good handwriting skills.

Inspector_Spinda 2016-03-16 18:06:43 UTC #6

Thanks. I tried that, but sizing it correcting and making decent sized bubbles takes too much erasing and then I spoil the page.

dglisson 2016-03-16 18:48:28 UTC #7

I like the style on both. The first one feels like it's getting more "love" from you, if I were you I'd do more inking on the second comic so that it can feel finished and professional. Even in black and white you still want that professional-ish feel or to be attempting to emulate it.

Inspector_Spinda 2016-03-16 18:52:02 UTC #8

Yes, that's true. Thanks for the advice. Looking back, I may have to redraw quite a number of the pages and ink properly. do you have anything you want me to look at?

dglisson 2016-03-16 20:39:44 UTC #9

If you want, feel free to check out my comic Beast Bait. I'll keep an eye out to see how you're progressing as well!

Inspector_Spinda 2016-03-16 20:45:40 UTC #10

woah! pretty intense I love secret agents. This looks pretty cool though the draws are a bit wonky. your muscle art is superb

gnekomikero 2016-03-17 14:44:41 UTC #11

COOL! I love AQ, but sadly i forgot my Id and my pass it was long long time ago. Mine is mage because I love explosion.
Have a visit to my work too if you also into explosion lol http://tapastic.com/series/BOMB-A

Inspector_Spinda 2016-03-17 15:22:46 UTC #12

OMG! I love your art style

gnekomikero 2016-03-17 16:35:55 UTC #13

really!? THANK YOU

Luie 2016-03-17 23:45:08 UTC #14

I can't say much about the first because there's only two pages, so there's not really any feedback I can give yet.

The second one looks really good. Your art style is nice to look at and even though the comic is traditional, it's not hindering in any way. Things are pretty crisp and clear. I will however, say that I have little to no idea what's going on. Your comic just starts and things happen, I have no context and I don't know why they are happening. But not a lot has happened yet so I wouldn't be surprised if things are explained later on.