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Apr 2021

your sentence is grammatically correct. Grammarly is really just wrong sometimes. I've honestly started ignoring it less and less

What about this:

"She notices the aroma of the multiple dishes being prepared fill the room"

I'm not sure if the "the" is necessary but what about "fill" instead of "filling."

I know. I'm just joking around :laughing:

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I think if you go this way it will need to be "fills" for a singular aroma. Easy to get confused with plural dishes between the aroma and its verb.

Oh yea because the verb is based off "the aroma" and not the "multiple dishes," so that would be more correct.

Wait..... realizes he didn't put any thought behind the last reply Uh-

I'd go for something like this:
"She notices that the air is (now) filled with the aroma of multiple dishes being prepared."

Do you need to mention the room in the sentence?

@crowstories
Nope, still keeping 'fill'.

@DanielRKM Yeah.. I need to keep the room in it...

Thank you, everyone! This is the final version:

Snapping out from her engrossed reading, she notices the aroma of multiple dishes being prepared fill the room.

Nicely done (he writes to satisfy the 20-character minimum on replies).

Honestly I think what you wrote in the first place was more grammatically sound. :sweat_smile:

@crowstories :weary: Tbh I didn't really change the sentence much.....the first sentence is still intact except for 'fill'....

I'm thinking now, that 'filling' was right in the first place... GAAAAAAH! That's it! **** you grammarly, Imma go with my instincts!

Yeah, it wasn't wrong. There's just a lot of information in that sentence so it's easy to lose track of which verbs to to which nouns.

I second removing 'being prepared" as it feels unnecessary. I'm sure the reader will figure out the dishes aren't done yet by whatever happens next and it makes the sentence pretty wordy. It might also be good to remove 'fill the room' for the same reason. It makes the sentence pretty complex and wordy. Maybe something like:

Snapping out of her engrossed reading, she notices the aroma of multiple dishes.