Constructive cristism on my comic please

thomassayle 2017-01-06 22:47:11 UTC #1

Hi there, The name is Thomas and i am here to say
Please read and review my comic if thats okay.
I'm not very good not optimistic
But please go and give it a click.

I need to know what to work on for the next story,
Sorry for the inconvince,and in advance i'm sorry.

https://tapastic.com/episode/173141

abbastudios 2017-01-07 03:15:55 UTC #2

On my iPad , this link does not go to your comic.

It opens my Tapas app to the Tapastic home page.

thomassayle 2017-01-07 08:16:35 UTC #3

Weird, well it works on my phone
To fix it, it is not known
But if you search
Tom and liam comic it will show.