Criticism and advice for these characters

ruffyodedraw 2016-11-25 13:17:57 UTC #1

Hi, these are characters for a comic contest, the story should be drawn in 3 hours, any opinion?
Is about colonization in the Caribbean islands

Down_the_Rabbithole 2016-11-25 14:30:19 UTC #2

In a contest like this, it sounds like you just need characters that are quick and easy to draw. If you can accomplish that, then these designs serve your purpose just fine. They look plenty appealing to me, so it's just about how fast you can repeat these designs.

punkarsenic 2016-11-25 14:53:13 UTC #3

they look very good! and i like your style, youll have no problems there, but im a little unsure about the historical accuracy? the girl in the middle kinda looks like her outfits been lifted from road to el dorado. i could be wrong, i dropped history in year 9 - but how much research have you done into the clothes your characters wear? given youre writing a historical story w lots of different cultures involved, i think thats important to consider.

ruffyodedraw 2016-11-25 15:02:01 UTC #4

Thank you, I'll have it in mind

ruffyodedraw 2016-12-01 14:00:28 UTC #5

Well, in the end the comics contest did not materialize, but I won in the drawing contest, I did this in an hour and a half.

https://www.facebook.com/RDDkun/photos/a.893857750719254.1073741829.892225190882510/967053820066313/?type=3&theater