designs etc...) all help is appreciated u.u

SteveFor 2018-10-17 18:05:27 UTC #1

I'm making this comic:

What do you think honestly?

Hodge 2018-10-17 18:29:01 UTC #2

So mainly just looked at the art, and I think you got a nice style going. Its cute and appealing. Some of the anatomy is off or the poses are stiff, but doubt it will bug most readers. Just watch out with the hatching and keeping it clean, maybe add some line width variety.

amortelito 2018-10-17 21:52:10 UTC #3

I think your style is gorgeous. The character design looks very distinctive and consistent, except for the length of Pearl's hair XD at times looks shorter or longer but nothing too not noticeable. I personally don't think it looks stiff. In fact I like their body language. Another personal opinion is that the line art is too thick, at lest the lines you draw as "shadows" could be more subtle. So far the story seems interesting! Good job!

SteveFor 2018-10-18 22:17:27 UTC #4

Thank you ^^ Ill improve it u.u

SteveFor 2018-10-18 22:18:39 UTC #5

Thank you so much ^^ , ill check more of those errors in the future thank you for the honesty

amortelito 2018-10-18 22:32:32 UTC #6

You are doing great! I just suggest some stuff based on preference, if you keep it like it is, is totally fine! Are you publishing on tapas too?