Critique my motion comic, yes?

[InkbyteStudios]

Hi everyone,

this is my first post so I wanted to get to the point. I've been doing my motion webcomic Power POP and wanted to hear some thoughts and critiques on how I can improve now that's it's fairly new. For example, the first chapter is kinda like a prologue so the story really starts until halfway thru ch 2 so that might make it "slow" for some readers. Stuff like that or any feedback would be appreciated. Here's some samples of the comic in question.

[heraclus]

I like it , keep doing it!!!

[lilydusk]

I had to drop by to say this is fantastic!!!! The art is quirky, edgy and to have it animated is really a treat for the eyes. Just one thing to point out: in the panel with the hand pulling off a piece of cloth, to have it in loop sort of defies the logical sequence of the comic (looks like an endless number of cloths being pulled). I would pay attention to which sorts of comic panels are being put made to loop. But still, it's an amazingly well done piece of art

[natchevil]

Wow, that looks like a lot of work.
Looks good, man.

[IdiotWithPencil]

everything looks amazing except the boom part, the fade effect makes it look weird compared to the smooth animation of the rest of the pages, don't know if that was your intention but or if you just couldn't make a it look smooth but hey don't stop cause of me =P

[InkbyteStudios]

Thanks everyone for the great feedback and glad you liked it!

[Rhombik]

Not much to fault here. Nice art, nice concept, nice character design, like what I've seen of the world so far.

One thing is that you change the lettering between episode 5 and 6. I prefer the old style. I think the new, neater style doesn't suit the comics as well.

[sandpaperdaisy]

These examples are all fantastic in different ways. The way you've shown details like the plane going across the sky really gives the first shot a sense of the scope of this world. The use of one dynamic panel and one still panel in the second example really gives emphasis to the movement and its importance. The way you blurred elements in the explosion page REALLY makes it seem like an explosion!

I just love everything about these.

[InkbyteStudios]

Thanks for the feedback! The old lettering was done by hand but since I kept changing the script I had to change to a font. I'm def still looking for a new one to fit the old one a tad closer.

[InkbyteStudios]

Awesome! Thanks for the kind words!