Critiquing First Chapters! A hit or a miss?

writeryoanroturier 2021-03-10 09:09:52 UTC #61

Hey man, I'll do that!

Here's the link to my novel:

Leave a comment, I probably won't read the review on the forum.

I'll leave a comment on your first chapter. If it picks my interest I'll read and leave comments on your other chaps.

Peace out!

arbiterswake 2021-03-11 03:36:58 UTC #62

Thanks for this thread. If you could leave your critique here on the forums I'd love it! I'll check your comic out as well.

JoshRaid 2021-03-11 03:39:12 UTC #63

Iridium 2021-03-11 20:32:34 UTC #64

Greetings!

1. Links (Bilingual)

2. About Feedback
Either way is fine by me! If you prefer the forum, I'll read and reply! If you prefer on the comic, I'll read and reply as well!

I'll make my best to reply on your book as soon as I can!

sorin_gran 2021-03-13 03:07:11 UTC #65

Critique is greatly appreciated!

ruqi 2021-03-13 18:32:58 UTC #66

Hello, good day! Thank you so much for the thread. I would really love feedback. You can place it here in the comments, if that's easier. I have already read and commented on your work, which was exceedingly well done, by the way. There wasn't much of anything that I could give criticism on. Keep up the good work!

I'm currently on the Prequel stages of my novel series, Fug & Furor. Book 1, Ice & Ichor, starts soon. Please check it out if you want to, and I hope you enjoy it!