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Are they grounded in reality or over the top? I'm reading David Copperfield rn, and it's interesting to me reading the way David practically worships the girls that he falls for throughout the story, seeing them as angels and goddesses. Even if you as the author have a pretty grounded perspective of them, how do the characters see each other?

While Alicia has a fairly grounded perspective of her sweetheart Kattar, she basically worships his mother, Mrs. Moon. In her eyes she is the pinnacle of feminine power. Beautiful, collected, smart, successful. An almost literal goddess in every way while still being feminine, and gentle. This is nothing short of awe inspiring for a woman who has very little of her own life in control, so Alicia has Mrs. Moon on a pedestal, so that even Kattar's not-so-good opinion of Mrs. Moon doesn't have a lot of sway in how she sees her.


Iā€™m just worn out - tired of having to think - sick of ā€˜adulting.ā€™

The muddy blues bleed through and I wallow in them.

Nothing ever seems to go as planned, but then I still have to make new plans, only for those to be twisted - morphed into other plans - someone else's plansā€¦

Itā€™s not like that for Mrs. Moon.

Almost nothing seems to ever be out of her control, to catch her by surprise. When things do go wrong in her corner, itā€™s always indirectly, somebody elseā€™s faux-pas or trickle-up bad judgment that somehow manages to leak into her queendom - demi goddess-dom.

That said, she doesn't completely disregard Kattar's feelings. She just can't quite separate them from her own. She loves Kattar, finds him almost impossibly beautiful, but she also sees him as human, almost the same level as her, so it's easy for her to associate his discontent with the way he was raised with tumultuous moods, just like she herself feels. She does associate Kattar with a level of immaculate self-possession and order that is unattainable for herself at least, but she doesn't worship him the way she worships his mother, and she largely considers those traits in him the result of being born Mrs. Moon's child.


The bedroom door swings open at the gentlest prodding, unlike mine, which always sticks.

How he manages to weave perfection into even the littlest parts of his life is beyond me.

Must be his mother's blood.


My skin bristles at Kattarā€™s ā€˜betā€™ forming a thousand tiny thorns under the thin petals of my rose-colored dress. His eyes arenā€™t angry, but theyā€™re dead serious, and I feel the need to fire back sharply - in defense of myself and Mrs. Moon.

ā€œWho cares what your dad thinks? What does he have to do with this?ā€

ā€œNobody.ā€ Kattar shrugs, coolly, ā€œAnd nothing. What does he have to do with anything?ā€

The casual way he says it catches me off guard. I stare at him bewildered, unsure whether heā€™s angry, or if he really doesnā€™t care. Heā€™s never talked much about his dad in the pastā€¦I guess because thereā€™s nothing to say.

Kattar flips the sandwich over on his plate with two fingers, as if afraid to dirty his hands.

The silence thickens.

I canā€™t help but ask, with a shy half-laugh, ā€œWhatā€™s got you so meditative all of a sudden?ā€

As for Kattar, he sees Alicia basically as she is, except that he maybe considers her a little more selfish than she really is, because he's used to getting his own way, and having to deal with being denied what he wants gives him an inaccurate impression of anything he doesn't like. Mostly he's able to resist that idea and operate like a mature adult, but occasionally he'll get a little moody about it.

Like Alicia, he also sees his mother as a goddess, but in a very different sense. More the sort of creator god that you spend your life afraid of the displeasure and trying to win the favor of, knowing you're at the mercy of their opinion of you. Interestingly, he has never been punished in his life, not once. But he grew up to be an organized, well behaved child, because his mother's disapproval and disappointment in him was so insufferable that he just did what she wanted. He knew if he did something she disagreed with there would be nothing he could do to regain standing in her eyes, so he just didn't.

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All my examples are currently massive spoilers, but for the two main ā€œshipsā€, they have similar, but different situations when it comes to viewing people.
Eva sort of views everyone as a variable, a list of reactions to certain actions. Slinky isnā€™t very different to her, except sheā€™s extremely fascinated by them.
Slinky does not view themselves as human, and is pretty confused about other people. They have a pretty grounded view of Eva, and just thinks sheā€™s a nice person.
Spoiler 1 is incredibly screwed in the head, and thinks of other people as not exactly below him, but as separate, less important entities. Except spoiler 2, who he absolutely adores and believes is the one of the only other people to be on his level.
Spoiler 2 thinks people are shitty and stupid, and hate him by default, blah blah blah, that type of stuff. But heā€™s really attached to spoiler 1, and thinks of him as a harmless little fella, that just makes an occasional social slip up. Basically they treat life as a ā€œthem against the worldā€ situation


Ps: sorry for the massive text wall lol

seeing people as variables doesn't sound very nice to me lol. and i hope spoilers 1 and 2 can find healthier views of the world

yikes, but at least i'm hoping that means it'll happen?

15 days later

Andrew basically idealizes his older sister. He believes that she is perfect and has never done anything wrong enough to consider a big deal, loving her blindly with all his heart. He basically loves his best friend the same way. He refuses to read negatively into anything, so he even argues against the people themselves if they try to convince him that they are bad people.


I want to say something encouraging, but the affection is drowned out by bitter memories.

I canā€™t keep my voice steady or keep my thoughts to myself.

The words come out like a sob - like a shot of venom - ā€œI just didnā€™t want to pull a ā€˜momā€™ā€¦ā€

It hangs in the air for an infinite millisecond.

ā€œI never would have thought that. It would have been nice to knowā€¦Alicia. I donā€™t want to have toā€¦ā€

ā€œIā€™ll do better.ā€

Twice in one day.

I guess I have a lot to fix - to get together.

ā€œIā€™ll be a better big sister.ā€

ā€œYouā€™re a perfect sister,ā€ he says stubbornly, and I shake my head on my end of the line, but I canā€™t find the voice to argue my own fallibility with him.

Ethan probably views men and women pretty differently, and that can be best shown through his drawings

Yes I designed an entire ass artstyle and signature for my oc, and it was the best use of my time

Before Tatara and Yuki got together, Tatara had a very romanticised version of Yuki in his head. He saw this guy who was a wonderful and passionate piano player, and therefore thought he must be this beautiful and perfect person based on how he played. Yuki thought Tatara was also other worldly, basically falling for the person he presented when he was in drag as a drag queen, who happens to be a very elegant and royal seeming person. Over many months, they learned who the other really was through intense conversations. They fell in love all over again when they learned more about each other. They both learned that they're just awkward, goofy people who definitely aren't perfect and that lack of perfection makes them fall even more in love with each other every day.

18 days later

Yeah, it's definitely important to learn to see people accurately. Even if at first glance it seems nice to only believe the best of someone, perfection is ultimately impossible, and trouble will come up whenever the veil is pulled from starry eyes

18 days later

I think Riley's perspective of Leia is mostly accurate, but it is a bit extreme. He sees her as his best friend protector and guardian angel, but any time he's mad at her he sees her as a complete and total jerk and bully and he doesn't know why he tries to deal with her. there is no in between.

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16 days later

I can't say that Dominic's view of Essence is very grounded at the start, because it's so limited. The way he sees her at first has everything to do with the initial impression he got of her, and her appearance. He saw her as very regal, almost magical looking, and sexy (cough.) As he develops a sense of what she's like personality-wise, it's fairly accurate, but it doesn't go deep enough. He thinks she's impossible to please, and this is true, but it isn't entirely her choice, but the people who haven't lived in her body or seen the world through her eyes often won't understand how sincere she is about not liking or caring for anything.

12 days later

Essence has a weird form sort of halo effect she casts on everyone, telling herself they are better than she thinks they are, or she needs to be more lenient with them because other people have a much harder time going through life than she does because of yk...emotions. So allowances have to be made for all the ways they treat her like trash.

As for crushes, she doesn't have one, and it would be a spoiler to say whether she ever has had or will have one. The guy she's going out with is Dominic, and everyone sees Dominic pretty accurately to who he is, but with slight leanings to certain extremes depending on how much they like him

She thinks he is very friendly and cheerful, but too passive and non-confrontational.

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Christopher George thinks Mora looks like some kind of magical princess, and he's kind of close lol. he loves flowers, so the fact that she has purple spots on her skin is pretty to him, but unfortunately, we probably won't get to read any portion of the story from his perspective.

20 days later

Verner thinks Therese looks like an adorable little frontier woman, especially because her lifestyle seems pretty outdated to most people, making butter, and jam, and bread by hand. Sewing clothes herself, etc. She's the perfect little vintage housewife, but he likes it, and finds her un-glamorous, rustic style whimsical and pretty.

21 days later

We actually get a bit of perspective on how Kattar sees Alicia in some of the chapters of Damsel in the Red Dress revolving around a photo mishap.

Alicia accidentally sent Kattar a picture of her wearing this dress she said was "super boring" but he clearly didn't agree, because a few days later she found he'd set the picture as his phone screen saver. Or maybe it's just the wearer he was interested in lol...

The main character, Vita, in my story views another character Andrew as a weirdo at first. He thinks Andrew is an idiot who puts his heart before his mind, which is very true and bad for a lawyer (lol). Throughout the story Vita learns more about Andrew, and although he is still convinced Andrew is an idiot, he grows to love him.

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