Nice idea!
I needed something like this
Here is one of my main charactors thats already introduced in the first chaptor.
I like the chacractor you have provided, Michael he seems like a cool dad,
I'll check your story out later
Kandake is a very nice girl towards others, she doesn't have the best relationship with one of her close family and isn't a morning person eithor. A 5'8 in Hight and 14 in years, shes the best in her team in basketball and yet she feels like there is something missing that she needs to figure.