Describe your novel, but JUST like dialog from a children's book

Leyelle 2024-01-01 00:00:10 UTC #1

This is Alicia. Alicia is sad. She's sad because the car went crash.

SoftWonderBun 2024-01-01 00:32:34 UTC #2

https://forums.tapas.io/t/novelists-ill-offer-my-best-writing-advice-no-horror-or-nsfw-closed/80258

Are these not the same? Not sure why you closed the first one. It seems you've made 15 topic posts in the last 12 hours, just be careful so you don't get flagged for spam.

Leyelle 2024-01-01 00:37:05 UTC #3

closed the other because I was still getting novel review requests, should have just edited it, but thanks, I'll be careful. Though the number has to be a glitch, because my server says that I've only made 7 today, and I didn't make any at all yesterday. (though I am most likely in a different time zone). BTW what is your user icon? A cyborg rabbit?

SoftWonderBun 2024-01-01 00:45:51 UTC #4

I see, my mistake! It's just an albino rabbit with a frilly collar.

Leyelle 2024-01-01 00:47:50 UTC #5

no need to apologize, i really think it is my mistake, because I'm on a different time zone than the tapas website, thanks for the warning so I can watch out for that

Questionable_Liquid 2024-01-02 07:01:15 UTC #6

Ahh, speaking as a novice in creative writing, my specialty!

The year is 2050. People are happy. People are living. People are puppets.

rosskinnaird 2024-01-02 13:08:57 UTC #7

'...and then the big bad one found out what they had done and took all their toys... forever!'

Kuma 2024-01-02 13:23:27 UTC #8

In a realm of magic, both bold and bright,
A Knight and a Mage, an unlikely sight.
Unknown to them they lived under tyranny,
Both would end involved in a conspiracy.

Leyelle 2024-01-02 16:17:01 UTC #9

oooh, i like that one

Leyelle 2024-01-02 16:17:40 UTC #10

@rosskinnaird Were toys really stolen in your story? that's coincidental...
@Kuma when Dr. Seuss didn't even occur to me

Kuma 2024-01-02 16:21:43 UTC #11

It was the first thing it came to mind when I thought of noticeably children books with a very easy to guess style.

MomoKushBear 2024-01-02 16:24:26 UTC #12

Stan lives peacefully. A very bad man comes along and takes the things away that make Stan happy and at peace. Now Stan has become a very bad and unhappy man looking for who wronged him. His friends tag along to maybe help him feel better and maybe find some happiness too.

Leyelle 2024-01-02 16:25:57 UTC #13

great! though I feel like the words 'peacefully' and 'wronged' are a little too big for a children's book

Innocynce 2024-01-02 16:27:38 UTC #14

People grow very big, people grow very smart; but they're mean, dumb fatheads! But the heroes aren't, I like them

Leyelle 2024-01-02 16:30:45 UTC #15

I'm confused, how are they very smart and dumb at the same time, exactly? Or is it like they have book smarts but no emotional intelligence?

rosskinnaird 2024-01-02 17:01:44 UTC #16

lol kind of. But the toys were Time, Health, Soul and Love (it's a fantasy novel).

Leyelle 2024-01-06 03:44:54 UTC #17

This is Mr. Park, he is hair is very gray. His hair is very gray because Miss Lizzy is crazy,

steppdusty 2024-01-14 00:43:47 UTC #18

Harahel can't find her God and that make her very sad. I bet that naugthy Antioch has something to do with it!

Innocynce 2024-01-14 15:54:18 UTC #19

Our dynamic duo's first two fights!

Leyelle 2024-01-19 20:46:48 UTC #20

Hush. Nobody tell mommy.