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"As he pondered what to do next, the last crimson rays of the setting sun slowly sunk into the mountains, as if the peaks surrounding Pine Hill were the toothy maw of a gigantic beast taking a bite out of the sun." This is from a novel I'm working on.
I have a very extensive Spotify playlist with a mix-mash of genres, eras and countries.
Callis sensitive taste buds can't take any strong flavors. He likes unseasoned jerky and grain tea. Novus has more of a sweet tooth, so he enjoys Dulratis Sap Candies, drinking sweetened Noxaeter and beaten Acrilla egg whites with Nixcinus berry jam.
I did a big plot summary. I split the plot into segments. I split the segments into scenes. I write the scenes. .... Profit?
My day job is writing for videogames. I worked on the game this short is promoting and did some tie-in comics script that were shelved. The producer informed me years after working on this project that they were using my scripts for this series.
A couple of years back, I worked for a game called Phantom Galaxies. I did world-building, mission writing and more. They also asked me to do comic-book scripts as a tie-in for the game, but that ended in nothing. Years later I got informed they are using my scripts for animated shorts and here we…
Awesome! Thanks you!
[image] Either pick Novus (On left) or Callis (on Right)
I'm a writer, not an artist. My day job also is about creative writing so I developed a habit... or a vice with writing.
I'm about to reach 3 years of serialization and I've 500 average monthly views.
Haven't revealed the main antagonist yet, but many of the people involved with him/her are active in the story.
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In a game as choke full of awesome bangers, when you have the best guitar solo by a country mile, you know you fucking rock. @UnTalAugustus FLACO! ESO ES TENER BUEN GUSTO!
Don't beg. There. Just share it on social media regularly.
Don't sell yourself short, it looks pretty great!
The Ousama Sentai Kingohger OST is choke full of BANGERS By the way, I highly recommend Kingohger. If you ever watch a Sentai, watch Kingohger. Amazingly acted, written and with creativity up to the ears. Plus the BANGERS
https://tapas.io/series/Centris/info I'm game
[image] Take your pick between Novus (Left) or Callis (Right)
I split them apart. It was one of the first pieces of feedback given to me.
Chapter 84 is available on Tapas.
Chapter 84 is freshly out of the oven
Chapter 84 of Centris is out in Tapas. You can check 85 early if you sub to my Ko-fi
The Full Release of Chapter 84 is out. You can already read Chapter 85 on my Ko-fi
I more or less do that in my head
Laika: Aged Through Blood. Amazing Metroidvania game with very fun traversal and combat mechanics. Great visual storytelling and designs. GODLIKE MUSIC
https://www.instagram.com/mario.kuma.mentasti/ My IG is mostly food, stand-up and pro-wrestling related.
Two things You should write in English You should write it more cleanly, you're missing spaces after the commas and it's hard to read. Dos cosas Deberias escribir en Ingles Deberias escribir mas claro, te faltan espacios despues de las comas por ejemplo, lo hace dificil de leer.
No. Is like the whole "How many 4th grades you can beat up?" But even more difficult.
Thank you so much! I love this feedback! I'll take it to heart! As you guessed I'm a native spanish speaker. I've tried to use " " for dialogue but it feels wrong, so unless it's for work, I don't do it.