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evanmurellin 2026-02-20 02:47:06 UTC #61

Hi everyone,

I wanted to share my novel The Age of Echoes, a dark fantasy mystery exploring memory, identity, and the unsettling feeling of not fully understanding the world around you.

Leo’s journey isn’t just about survival — it’s about piecing together fragments of reality, strange voices, and hidden forces that refuse to stay hidden.

Expect a slow-burn story with a heavy atmosphere and long-term mysteries.

If that sounds like your kind of read, I’d love for you to give it a try.
https://tapas.io/series/The-Age-of-Echoes/info

filippocupi 2026-03-11 11:25:31 UTC #62

Here's the link to my novel! I'd love to hear your thoughts.
After witnessing the extermination of his family by monstrous beings from a dark dimension called Morvian, Marco joins a prestigious order of intergalactic warriors, defenders of light against darkness.
This will be just the beginning of numerous adventures, friendships, loves, and losses.
Until he understands the true nature behind the struggle between good and evil, light and darkness.

kickgamer78 2026-03-12 03:41:57 UTC #63

Hello! I'd love to hear some feedback about the big-picture thoughts and general impressions/encouragement of my novel!

I really want to know what other people think of my novel!

Lilyflowerv 2026-03-12 04:39:58 UTC #64

If you're still doing this, I would love some feedback and thoughts on my novel!

Thank you so much!