Drop Your Novel, I'll be your critic

jr3indisputable 2024-04-24 19:12:58 UTC #48

This is very enjoyable...I just read it and forgot I was supposed to write a review. Here are my thoughts:

Very well-paced. It captured me immediately and kept me throughout with laughter and...butterflies. Yes, it gave me butterflies, don't judge. The grammar and vocabulary are very easy for me to navigate through. It is beginner-friendly, yet it still captivates a veteran reader, me.

Overall, would continue and possibly finish it!

Hmm... 10/10

authorautumnbanks 2024-04-24 20:35:27 UTC #49

Ahh! Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it!
Have a great week!

Mansi_Gu 2024-04-24 20:50:58 UTC #50

Casually dropping my novel here~ Hope you have fun!

sevenstarsofeightIam 2024-04-24 22:21:29 UTC #51

Thanks. Take your pick.

HostileFren 2024-04-24 22:25:31 UTC #52

Thank you for the review! I should defnitely go back through and read everything over again, there are always things I seem to miss, especially as I started it a few years ago now.
Btw I noticed you used to have a novel of your own, but the link wasn't working anymore, did you stop writing your own story?

jr3indisputable 2024-04-24 22:45:29 UTC #53

I loved that story and I lost passion. So I took it down and decided to work on it before showing it off again.

Edit: I decided to explore a different genre for now. If you're interested, here, I write when I get bored reading:

HostileFren 2024-04-24 22:49:19 UTC #54

That definitely happens! I definitely tend to have favorite stories I prefer to work on, which is why I'm working on two stories at one time. I work on one when I have inspiration and my buffer allows me to alternate between which ones I want to do.

HostileFren 2024-04-24 23:13:16 UTC #55

I'm actually loving your story so far! Just in the three chapters that are up, you have already given so much information without directly feeding it to us. And you've already given a nickname for the MC. Aside from his terrible choice in friends, he seems like a likable MC so far
Question:
Do you refer to Ethan as Eth in your head as you write?

jr3indisputable 2024-04-24 23:26:05 UTC #56

Yo, I really appreciate this! I wasn't thinking of gaining a view from criticizing other works but man!

Yes, I do refer to him as Eth, and he's really freakin' kind.

HostileFren 2024-04-24 23:30:36 UTC #57

I always like to read other people's works and I've found a few really good stories from random topics here in the forums. I have found a few stories that I look forward to reading each time they update, and I'm definitely adding this one to the list.

I'm looking forward to seeing more of his personality. I feel like the cold and rude MLs have been really popular but I love when the MLs are genuinely nice people. I want to see how Eth makes up for his terrible friends. I do like how you didn't even bother to give them names because I will be referring to them collectively as a pile of trash

jr3indisputable 2024-04-24 23:32:19 UTC #58

Righ, they are trasht!!

mg_xiii 2024-04-25 19:45:45 UTC #59

I understand. Thanks for the rewiew, I’ll try to go more in that way even though I’m the type to like a solid build up before straight action. Thanks again!

Todoyama 2024-04-25 19:55:23 UTC #60

Hello, sorry to bother you, but could you review my Novel too, whenever you have the time?

Here it is (just in case): https://tapas.io/episode/2998127

Genres: Fantasy, comedy.

jr3indisputable 2024-04-26 02:12:27 UTC #61

Hey, guys, I haven't been reading new novels since I got really sick these past days. I'll get back to it when I can~!

MK_Wizard 2024-04-26 02:38:01 UTC #62

Since this is the first novel I've ever shared online, be my guest.

Vayvaction 2024-04-27 11:56:23 UTC #63

Get well soon!

itsShiba 2024-04-27 12:10:48 UTC #64

Hello, I'd be grateful to have people review my work. It's a new Isekai story I'm writing.

Leyelle 2024-04-27 16:41:30 UTC #65

I hope you feel better soon. drink water and rest

comicsdmt 2024-04-27 19:59:54 UTC #66

I believe in criticism!

Leyelle 2024-05-10 00:18:07 UTC #67

I gave you a follow over on IG, this is my Patreon piece (it's free to access) if you'd lemme know what you think I'd appreciate it. You don't have to sugar coat anything lol

Chapter 1:

Chapter 2: