jr3indisputable
Jr3indisputable
USA
I am a relatively new writer who has an obsession with coffee and food.
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- Aug 9, '24
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Heya, Todoyama!! So I got to about the 3rd chapter, and surprisingly, I have not been bored yet. SO YOU GOT ME HOOOOOOOOKED. And that's good—points for that. However, I noticed your writing style leans toward script-writing. Have you written a play before? With the parenthesis, your way of desc…
Escaping from reality LOL
Very interesting. Dropping review soon.
Free subs, I give. Thanks for dropping by.
I'll drop a review soon. Thanks for stopping by.
Hey Leyelle, I have been too focused on school lately. Hope you're alive.
So do I. Thanks for replying, I'll drop the review soon!
Keep it up, I'll drop the review soon.
Heya, I haven't been active. I'll give this a read and a free sub lol. Thanks for replying.
Heya, I do not know if you're still up for a critic, but I will do it anyways! This will take me a while.
I'm surprised this Thread hasn't disappeared yet. Alright, time for me to read.
Hey, guys, I haven't been reading new novels since I got really sick these past days. I'll get back to it when I can~!
Any subs would be highly appreciated!! [image] !
Let's do it! My account: @jrindisputable
Righ, they are trasht!! 
Yo, I really appreciate this! I wasn't thinking of gaining a view from criticizing other works but man! Yes, I do refer to him as Eth, and he's really freakin' kind.
I loved that story and I lost passion. So I took it down and decided to work on it before showing it off again. Edit: I decided to explore a different genre for now. If you're interested, here, I write when I get bored reading:
This is my newest project!!! Hope you all like it! [image]
This is very enjoyable...I just read it and forgot I was supposed to write a review. Here are my thoughts: Very well-paced. It captured me immediately and kept me throughout with laughter and...butterflies. Yes, it gave me butterflies, don't judge. The grammar and vocabulary are very easy for me t…
I read the first chapter yesterday and continued today. Here are my thoughts: Yes, there is that mistique and granduer I think you were going for, but it lacked action. It might just be a preference of mine, but I like it when you entertain me first before giving me content. Get what I mean here? …
I was only supposed to review novels, but I gave it a shot. Here are my thoughts on this comic: Great art! I find it really pleasing to the eyes and very manageable to read through! The characters are distinguishable through their dialogues which I appreciate--a lot of comics mostly just focus on …
Hello there, HostileFren, I have read as far as possible to get a proper review. Here are my thoughts on this novel: First off, great transition from the 'real life' to the 'fantasy' part. At first, I didn't feel the fantasy vibes, but it was a sudden but gradual shift! I suppose she got into an a…
Yes, keep uploading, I read through it all already.
I don’t understand your story’s view retention. After all, your story is well-made. Let me start by emphasizing how well edited and formatted your work is. Very clean, and I appreciate it very much. The story itself is an actual masterpiece. It holds so much potential. Don’t mess it up. I have…
This is one of the best uprising novels I have read. You eased me gently into full-immersion! 9.7/10
Did you just critique my critique? Lol thanks so much!!!!
Yes, it is. It's also quite funny.
I'm hooked and possibly addicted. The way you structure the novel is chef's kiss. Then there's that trope of isekai that makes it familiar and easy to navigate through. Very funny and yet captures a different emotion than a simple laugh. 10.05/10.
Super good dialogues and unreal descriptions! 9.1/10
Try flirting IRL. Don't get in trouble tho lol