Earn Ink for a good Feedback (Pride Month)

Maxedrox 2023-06-05 15:17:03 UTC #1

I guess for Pride Month more LGBT users are aware so I want to ask a favor.
I know it can be... A little bit annoying to ask for your time to read a story that maybe it's not your interest, so, I'll pay you some ink in exchange for your help.
I only have 1000 ink available so the final amount will depend on the number of people willing to help.
Ok... So, the situation is this...Uh... Look, It is complicated for me to keep track of what the readers know about the world and what they need to know... I mean, after all, building a fantasy world is one thing but I need to be sure if the readers get it through the story or if they need some additional explanation.
And because they don't usually ask questions about the world, it makes me feel unsure if the information I want to expose is necessary or if they got it already.
Also, you can make questions about the plot, I don't think it's necessary but is a way to verify if the story is clear enough so far.

So, I just need questions about the Worldbuilding
If you want to make questions about the plot too, welcome

If you want to do it, please read all the chapters available before doing any questions.
I'm not going to take into account questions if the answers appears in later chapters available

Here is the link and sorry for bothering you

RainbowCat 2023-06-05 20:06:12 UTC #2

Heyy! I usually don't read stories with this much worldbuilding (because it often confuses me ) I might have not understood hints in the story that could answer these questions. But I tried my best and wrote down some questions. I hope they'll help you!

What does HY mean? (It first appears with the characters profiles and is only explained in one of your descriptions, which many people just ignore in stories )
It's mentioned that Subhams survive everything that can kill a human easily. I'm not really sure if that means viruses and that kind of stuff or how far does "easily" go?
Is time travel now possible or not? Sometimes it seems like they are not sure and other times it seems to be a very normal part of the world.
How do they travel in this world? Just by teleportation? We don't see anything else but then teleportation also doesn't seem so fun for them.
The Knowledge Guild seems like the government? Or what is their purpose? What do they do, I'm a bit confused about that.
Did I miss where the people who disappeared went to? Or did they just... vanish? If we know they used to exist and are now unexistent, where did they go? Do they have an explanation for that?

Maxedrox 2023-06-05 21:24:42 UTC #3

Thank you @RainbowCat you help me a lot actually
Don't worry if you didn't understand, it's my duty to make it clear as possible, it seems that some doubts are about situations that going to be solved later while other questions are really good and understandable.

I know this one was obvious and it was mentioned in a very few moments, but this means that I need to remind the readers about it just in case they lose track of what it means and don't want to go through a bunch of chapters back just for this. So, I'll keep it in mind.

that is a really good question, but it's not the kind of question I can answer with words, the readers need to see how durable Subhams are compared to Humans so it's mostly something that will be shown under different circumstances.

That was the kind of subject I was wondering if it was clear enough, it seems that it needs more exploration about it, so I'm glad to know

Well, thank you so much Rainbow Cat
You were the first and only person who notified me and offer their help so I'll send you 1000 ink right now.
You really make me feel more relieved about the whole situation about the story

RainbowCat 2023-06-06 06:14:33 UTC #4

I already suspected that some things will get answered in the future and those questions didn't keep me from understanding the plot, so that's good!
I'm glad I could help you and thank you for the ink!