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May 2020

I want to find people to critique and give me feedback on my comic but as a person with no social media presence and popularity, I can't find people do that for me. I want some people to critique my short story webtoon and I want to do the same for others!
Here is a link to my comic, Lucifer's Lies
It would much appreciated!

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    May '20
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    May '21
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The first half was just a turn off because the protagonist was just trash but then came the plot twist and everything made so much more sense (I'm not saying that protagonists have to be flawless but that guy was literally killing small woodland creatures and enjoying it). The art style is pretty good, the backgrounds are pretty well made and I like the characters' design (especially because they just fit so well their facade). I'm actually excited to see what happens next!

Here's the novel I want feedback on if you have time:

Yeah, marco was just there to be killed lol. I tried to make him pretty unlikeable just so the main character, Luci didn't seem like a bad person. But I'm glad you liked it and I hope you stick around to the end. I'll check out your novel and be sure to give you some feedback. Once again thank you! :smile:

11 months later

I'd appreciate some advice, feedback or critique.

8 days later