Neo_Uma
- Joined
- May 17, '20
- Last Post
- Jun 9, '20
- Seen
- Mar 1, '21
- Views
- 25
- Trust Level
- member
The first MC has his eyes missing as a sort of parody a certain type of anime protagonist, I didn't think too much of it 
As for the name 'Lucifer' well that will be explained so don't worry about that. And the pacing for the first episode is pretty quick, I tried to fit everything in for the big re…
I'm glad you liked the twist! And yeah, the pacing for my first episode is really quick, it's because the short story competition is only limited to 5 episodes so I tried to fit in a lot for my first episode. But I'm glad you took the time to check it out!
Thank you very much!
Here's mine, it's an isekai where the main character a fairy summons a hero to defeat the demon lord, pretty generic huh? I promise it has a very good plot twist in the first episode that I don't want to spoil! Please check it out, it would be much appreciated!
Here's my comic, if you could check it out it would be much appreciated. I'll be sure chrck yours out! Here's the link:
It's honestly pretty hard to get feedback as a small comic creator so I came here looking for some. Responses would very appreciated! Here's my comic:
I haven't got many subs on my webtoon so checking it out would be much appreciated! Here it is:
I haven't got many subs on my webtoon so even 1 or 2 would be much appreciated!! Here it is:
This will be really helpful, I find it's hard to get any feedback so I hope you can help me improve. Here's my comic
Yeah I'm in the middle of drawing my first webtoon, but I wasn't in much of a rush myself, I gave myself time to polish the story, the scripts and the character designs etc. It mean I'm a bit behind but carefully planning out your story before you make it should be a no brainer. In terms of readers…
Yeah, marco was just there to be killed lol. I tried to make him pretty unlikeable just so the main character, Luci didn't seem like a bad person. But I'm glad you liked it and I hope you stick around to the end. I'll check out your novel and be sure to give you some feedback. Once again thank you! 
…
Please check out my short webtoon, Lucifer's Lies. For any weebs it's an isekai with a twist, and maybe some romance 
It's very fantasy and is going to get a lot of action soon but it's still there It would much appreciated if you could sub and like, thank you
Are webtoons allowed? 
Here it is anyway, I hope you enjoy
Please do! I've been looking for some hard criticisms since I want to improve, my webtoon is called Lucifer's Lies
Please check out my short webtoon, Lucifer's Lies. For any weebs it's an isekai with a twist, and maybe some romance It would much appreciated if you could sub and like, thank you
I want to find people to critique and give me feedback on my comic but as a person with no social media presence and popularity, I can't find people do that for me. I want some people to critique my short story webtoon and I want to do the same for others! Here is a link to my comic, Lucifer's Lies …
Much appreciated! I'll definitely check out yours!
Yeah, I know it's all in my head, you're right. It's just hard to get motivated, you know. This question isn't going to solve anything for me but words like yours do give me hope, thanks!
I've posted my entry for the webtoon short story competition but I'm still disappointed at the amount of views. It's not that been that long since I posted but the views aren't great. It's even more discouraging to see other entrys with thousands of likes and subscribers. I haven't got that many peo…