Feedback and help needed (WEBTOON)

[b4rdise]

Hello, How are you?
Hope you are doing great ^^

I am actually looking for some feedback/help and I decided to ask here on this forum since a lot of great artists are using it.
(Actually whether you are an artist or a reader you can still help me ^^)

I started my webtoon in August/26/2018, so far I have 206 view, 3 likes, and only one subscriber.. I got downrated as well. maybe because there's a contest going on these days?
I was 10, then 5.50, and now I am 4.0.

Can you please take a look at my webtoon and tell me what do you really think about it?

It's called Barodiso

Barodiso

How can I increase the number of subscribers and audience engagement in general?

I would really appreciate any sort of help ^^

Thank you so much.

[Rosso]

i'm a bit tight on time but here are few things real quick:

1. Change one of the genres to Animals. You'll have MUCH more chance of exposure than the overly saturated Comedy & Slice-of-Life categories.
2. First impression is the Thumbnail so make sure it's something that grabs the attention. Make the animal more prominent? more color?
3. Make sure you save the final product at 100% quality.

good luck!

[b4rdise]

Thank you so much for the feedback. It's really helpful.
I already changed one of the genres to Animals, and I will try to fix the thumbnails and quality.

Thank you so much for your time and help

[fleohr]

I think your writting is good, but unfortunately people only look at the art first then start reading it if the art suits their taste

So yeah, keep drawing, try drawing more poses, so it won't be too repetitive, and don't feel discorage about the rating

[b4rdise]

Thank you so much ^^
Yes, you are right. I think the drawings of the first episodes are too repetitive since I was focusing on the story itself.
I will try to edit it and use more poses.
Thank you so much for your support ^^

[han0211]

Hey, I've read your comic and was quiet amazed by your story-telling skills . I've subscribed to your comic to see how your comics will progress . More power to you ~!

[b4rdise]

WOW! Thank you so much your comment really made me happy ^^
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[han0211]

I've just noticed a typo . I meant to write "Your" . Ahahahahha

[b4rdise]

hahahaha that's totally fine! don't worry about it XD