Feedback on Design Title

[yoboketto]

Hello! So I’ve been trying to figure out a good design for my title. This is going to be for a webcomic that I’m working on. Any feedback would be great!

[Yulek]

I think the typograohy is great!
mybe the blue needs a darker shadow color, to merge less with the white background
but that's the only nitpick

[IndigoShirtProd]

I think the the heart character next to the "o" in "of" should replace the "o." And I agree the blue should probably a darker color.

[Yulek]

hmmmaybe not replace

there's very different sized margins/gaps in the logo

so you could make those more even

and make both lines the same height

I don'T think any of those things would really bother anyone, but hey, when youre already putting effort into a pretty title

[yoboketto]

Okay I tried it out. It doesn’t look bad at all tbh. Kinda hard to chose!

[yoboketto]

Oh I darkened the blue lines and it does look better!

[EncryptedWriting]

The simplier the better. I like what you have now. I find it to be adorable and well placed. Absolutely well done.

[Cavechan]

I would go back to having just one of the squares with heart inside because two is too distracting/busy. I think the legibility of this logo is perfect.

I feel like it could be pushed a tiny bit further though. Like what if "of you" was diagonal or "fun", more bubbly, in some way? Well, depends on the feel you're going for too.

[simplykit]

nice and simple. its good