Feedback Request

[7yLer]

Hello everyone!

It's been a long time since I've posted here, mostly due to health reasons, and barely hanging on with my Webtoon, Spark in the Dark.

However, I feel like my comic is picking up speed story-wise, and I was wondering if I could get some feedback/critique of both art and story from some friends on here?

I'll gladly reciprocate with likes/follows/comments on your own comics if you post the link in your comment!

-Tyler

Link to newest episode: https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/spark-in-the-dark/wake-up-call/viewer?title_no=198829&episode_no=25

[Mr_estella]

i've just read the frst episode and i have to say it's pretty good. the art looks very professional, i can see this in a comic by marvel or DC, and the story seems interesting, from what i read it feels is going to be Sci-Fi and Horror... in general is a great work, i've subscribed and i hope you can get it to be more famous, you deserve it
if you could comment on my comic and give me some feedback, i'd be very glad, i just started it and is not as good as yours, i write it and make the art alone, but here it is:

Dark & Strange | Tapas

[JackSherwin]

hey just read your story and I love the art and mystery to it so far it great. Story is great as well

the only big thing I can say is to change your thumbnail your using for the series.
your art is great and this is what people look at to click to read your story. you don't need the title in the thumbnail that's already on the page, and text underneath, use the small space you have to show of the art of your series, and you'll get more people checking out your series.

I've just subbed on webtoons

if you want check out my series on webtoons as well

Dark Web

Dark Web | Tapas

[7yLer]

Wow, Jack, I just read your webtoon, and man it's compelling!

Thanks for the feedback on the thumbnail, I debated whether to have the title in it or not myself, seems like a good idea to show off the art rather than reiterate the title.

Thanks a lot! Subbed/liked your series as well, thanks again!

[7yLer]

Wow, there is a lot going on in your comic! Kudos on wroting and artwork by yourself, it looks great! Subbed/added to library!

[Mr_estella]

thanks i appreciate it