The art was really great! You have a good grasp on anatomy and your comic was really action packed 
. The backgrounds are not that bad but i think it could use a little more work especially on the shading. Story-wise, your comic has good pacing although there is not much to say about the plot. I thought she would catch the deer in the end but sht happens hahaha!
Over-all your comic was pretty good! Not bad for a first comic 
Keep it up!
P.S.: for your next project, i'd suggest having a story with dialogues. Also, have you considered on working on a full colored comic?
