@Ramiled
There were four books of yours, and I managed to review the first one for now.
The way Emery slowly turned into a flesh-eating, blood-sucking vampire sure was ordinary. But to some certain extent, you have chosen to keep the secret of why she became like this.
I wasn't sure yet since I just read the second chapter, so I'll leave it blank.
The word composition is written well in the second chapter. As for the first chapter, I suggest you may try to cut down a bit of clarity in your word. I saw repetitive wording in the same chapter. The part where she got home and how she faced her home environment, that part was got me lose a bit of attention.
Overall, your story piques my interest, and I'll go for it. I'll do the other three book once I free, as for tonight, I need to prepare my next chapter update.