Hey! I REALLY appreciate the review! I don't really know if you've read past the first episode, but I do fix some major issues with the textboxes, and put a lot more effort into the illustrations as the series progresses. Noticabley, the second episode onward, is MUCH easier to read, and I've dramatically improved how panels, and the text boxes are arranged. Though, I'm not really sure what "interpreting the illustration" means.
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I'd also like to state for the record, (this is for my readers as well) that my art style has had noticeable changes since I started work on the series, some of which can even be seen with the recent background characters. The way I illustrate the series is done in a way to keep the general look, and feel of the characters the same, without me having to worry about my art style evolving, as I don't want a sudden and complete art change literally half way through the series. However, I've actually been working hard on completely redrawing the characters, this being the first time I've truly done so in a while, with plenty of improvements, and noticeable changes, but little that actually changes the basic design of the character. (Clothing, Head Shape, Hairstyle, etc.) But again, for the sake of consistency, I've chosen NOT to use upgraded designs, instead saving them for if I ever want to revive/rewrite the series in the future, which currently, is a major possibility, but one I won't truly devote time to until at least a year after this first iteration of it has finished, which still won't be for a while.