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May 2020

I checked the episode. I think the art is top notch. Good luck in the contest. I checked some of the other contenders and I can tell you can compete easily for the top, if you can keep the weekly updates that is. You got a subscriber.

It's cool! You have a nice pace and the story unfolds well.

About technicalities:

I think some of the panels are a little bit pixelated :shook_01: (especially typography)

On a rythm note I would suggest not to put too much of the story on a single episode but cut it more, to allow the readers to have a pause :slight_smile:

Nice work and good luck!

hi, i think the composition is good, the collors are good, you might want to use png files since them preserve better the drawing quality, i like the effects you did and overall i think your art is really good. i already subscribed.
:slight_smile: good luck with your comic

Aw thanks so much! I’ll try to make sure the quality is better for this weeks episode. Let me know if it looks better when it comes out! :slight_smile:

Very nice.

Sub for sure. Love your water :astonished:

Please check my that I started just now. Good luck!

closed May 19, '20