First time creating a comic. Feedback/ or support pls ❤️

[ndd13a]

Hey guys!! This is my first time posting on here.. nice to meet you! I just posted my first Webtoon, and I know this seems like a weird place to talk about it, but I would appreciate some feedback on it?!? 🥺 It’s called Cerulean (H) under short stories

Here it is: https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/cerulean-h/list?title_no=433944

[MegaRay]

I checked the episode. I think the art is top notch. Good luck in the contest. I checked some of the other contenders and I can tell you can compete easily for the top, if you can keep the weekly updates that is. You got a subscriber.

[ndd13a]

Thank you so much! That means a lot!!

[Lea_ro]

It's cool! You have a nice pace and the story unfolds well.

About technicalities:

I think some of the panels are a little bit pixelated (especially typography)

On a rythm note I would suggest not to put too much of the story on a single episode but cut it more, to allow the readers to have a pause

Nice work and good luck!

[ndd13a]

Thanks for the feedback! That’s super helpful!

[dbeirigo]

this seems like a weird place to talk about it, but I would appreciate some feedback on it?!? 🥺 It’s called Cerule

hi, i think the composition is good, the collors are good, you might want to use png files since them preserve better the drawing quality, i like the effects you did and overall i think your art is really good. i already subscribed.
good luck with your comic

[ndd13a]

Aw thanks so much! I’ll try to make sure the quality is better for this weeks episode. Let me know if it looks better when it comes out!

[edicoesgorilase]

Very nice.

Sub for sure. Love your water

Please check my that I started just now. Good luck!

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