First time making a comic, wouldn't mind some critique on it so far!

[SWestComics]

So we're a two man crew of a writer and artist. A basic run down of the comic is that it is a super hero story set in Canada where approximately 20 years ago kids started developing powers. The comic is still in pretty early stages but your opinions would be appreciated on what you might think so far. Like I mentioned this is our first time doing something like this so we are both pretty green and just starting the comic off.

[JerrodStorm]

The premise seems really interesting, and the art style is great! It looks like there are a lot of typos though. You may want to have a few people proofread your comic before you post (don't worry, happens to me as well). The trails on your speech bubbles aren't always clear either (Here's a good thread for tips on bubbles: https://forums.tapas.io/t/share-your-nity-gritty-tips-speech-bubbles/18968/24)

[JerrodStorm]

I look forward to seeing where this goes!

[SWestComics]

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it! Going to try and clean up those typos I missed

[X237]

It has an interesting premise. The art itself is also rather good in my opinion. Which is also a plus! The only real problem would bet the typos. So long as you fix those then you'll be good to go. Heck I'd be willing to proofread them myself if you don't want to. Its a good comic with potential after all!

[CarltonIsaac]

Pretty good for a First. Story's interesting, keeps the reader's attention.

I love the edgy art style, the bold shades and darker overtones. Reminds me of Mike Mignola's stuff a bit.

Yep, just a simple fix on the typos and maybe a larger font size is all it needs.

[LovelyOtter]

The text is a bit blurry.