I gave a read to what you've shared, first, avoid writting on caps, you want to look appealing, you want to look professional, someone worthy of collaborating with, since you're a total stranger on the internet and people won't know anything about you besides what can be judged on first impressions.
If this is the only thing you have, then I believe you're an amateur, someone new to this, not because this is the only script you shared, but because it is terrible, it looks like a draft that someone did without having the proper time or care to polish it and make it presentable for another individual, if you want to propose this to an artist then you have to do a better job, artists are not blessed with the ability of reading minds, so you'll have to be clear because adjectives and certain descriptions will not be compatible and are either vague or abstract.
I would recommend first:
- Improve your english, communication is important, and your wording and grammar are very... low. A story written as if it was a message on social media is very, unappealing, especially again, for the unnecessary use of capital letters.
- It is important to put warnings and clarifications before your Document, not everyone likes or is available to read NSFW / R18 content (As well that it could be a violation of Tapas Guidelines, since you're sharing a link that leads to Mature Content and the minimum of age in this platform is 13, so you have to be responsible)
- If you struggle with English, then I believe the best would be to work in your native language and then, try to collaborate with an artist from India.
- Please read proper samples of comic scripts, how to properly describe a panel, angle, shot, have proper descriptions of characters, poses and not things that either the artist will have to guess or have to dig up from you.
- Remember that is important to know the guidelines of the places you're going to post your story, if there is very graphic violence, sexual scenes, adult content in general then, if you're aiming for Webtoon, Tapas or even Manga Plus, your content will be removed and rejected for violating the Community and Content Guidelines.