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Drop down your novel/comic and I'll review 1-3 chapters and perhaps other people will review your one. (I'm least interested in bl genre but perhaps someone else will review it)

Pick one or both of my stories to review

spirit princess - https://tapas.io/series/Spirit-princess/info7

When Aura has been raised all her life to be a possible candidate of the heiress/chosen one. Everything takes a twist when her twin Aster kills her. Aura is reborn as a mere commoner and must look for other warriors to reclaim her throne and restore peace. Title: The spirit princess. Book 1: spirits

I will be the death of you - https://tapas.io/series/I-Will-Be-The-Death-Of-You/info2

'Keep your friends close but keep your enemies closer'

I wonder if Vincent saw me as a friend or as an enemy?

What happens when Riona, an Elven princess, gets betrayed by her best friend, Vincent who she has been friends with for more than decade?

And of course it is no ordinary betrayal when Riona loses her best friend Vincent, her kingdom and Audrey, her maiden who was like a sister to her...

Now seeking revenge instead of making a deal with the devil she makes a deal with the northern duke...

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Not sure if this is for novels only, or if comics are also up for grabs. IN any case, I'm dropping a link to my comic Trespasser here. Always like to hear what people think:

Trespasser is an action adventure story set in a scifi world. It follows the journey of Kyara, an impulsive little badass, her best friend Zack and their robot pet Blip. Together they will face off against dangerous beasts, deranged machines and uncover ancient secrets. But over the horizon looms intrigue as the Citadel dispatches one of its acolytes, Grayson, out into the fields on a direct collision course with out heroes...

I will give it a read when I'm free :slight_smile: I've been meaning to get back into the action genre

I read one chapter so far and it super nice. The comic format is super refreshing and love the characters design. I'll probably finish reading when I have time. Hopefully you could read one of my work

It a nicely written story however it exactly pull me in to continue you reading probably just a me type of preference :sweat_smile: but hopefully you can review mine

The art style nice however I suggest expanding the scenes to give more insight on what going on cause it feel you kind of jumping to one event to the next. Hopefully you can review mine

Hi, this is my entry for the AF contest. would love to hear what u think of it?

The Blind Courtesan

Sypnosis:
Jun, a loner who only cares about money and games, found himself trapped within a novel in the body of a blind courtesan. A novel called, ‘The Regressor’s War’, a Murim world where the Constellations and the Towers had taken over, where the dark forces lurked holding secrets.

Jun couldn’t care less about the Regressor however the Tower wasn’t going just to let him be. The Tower assigned him an impossible mission, making sure Jun didn’t let the Regressor die and guide him through everything. Jun ensured the Regressor survived through any means necessary, even if he had to sacrifice himself…

When Jun realizes he’s the only one who knows the future of this world, he utilizes the knowledge to make sure he and the Regressor survive the Towers. Using his strategies and foresight Jun overcomes his enemies and hidden plots. As he delved deeper into the Tower, Jun discovered his fate had long been decided before he was born.

Milo, a cheerful yet impoverished college student, navigated his days with a smile despite his financial struggles. However, his life took a dark turn when he witnessed a cold-blooded murder by a menacing tall man. The murderer noticed him, and from that moment on, Milo felt the man's eyes on him everywhere.

One evening, Milo found his parents at the mercy of the same tall man. To save their lives, his parents shockingly offered Milo's marriage to the murderer. "Please, take our son instead," his mother pleaded. "He'll marry you. He'll do anything you want. Just spare our lives."

Milo felt his world tilt as the words sank in. "Marry this man?" His mind reeled at the thought, but he saw the steely resolve in the man's eyes, the gun still aimed at his parents.

The tall man considered their proposal, his eyes never leaving Milo. After a long, tense moment, he lowered his weapon. "Very well," he said. "Your son will come with me."

Milo's life changed in an instant. The cheerful college boy who once worried about exams and part-time jobs was now bound to a man whose presence alone instilled fear..