Get my positive comment and "heart" for free! (still active)

[amortelito]

Finally I had the time to "heart" and comment. Your writing style is gorgeous and surprisingly easy to read. At times I struggle with novels because english is my second languaje and some authors use vocabulary out of my league. But yours is easy to read while still being poetic <3 Great job!!

[mappypaint]

I'll take on this offer since it's free. ^u^ But since mine is a long one then just feel free to pick a part... or just when you get free time. :3

University of Speed | Tapas

Then maybe we can do positive things for our comics in the future.

[OneHappyChap]

Thank you so much and thanks for all your lovely comments!! <3 Glad to hear you enjoyed it!

[amortelito]

I always keep my promises, dooone!! I'm enjoying your novel very much. I love the sarcastic humorous undertone. Love the action and the domestic drama between the characters. I will keep reading. Also you have been so supportive of my stuff <3 <3 <3 if I can do something in return let me know. (your dog's picture gives me life jajajaja XD)

[Jbcryptic]

Magical Dudes | Tapas

<3

[amortelito]

Yeh it is pretty long. I'm enjoying the story so far Well done!!! Also I like the mix of digital and traditional coloring

[amortelito]

ahhhhh so adorable!!! I subscribed :3

[mappypaint]

It slowly switches to fully digital around part 6. Thanks for taking your time on it ^u^

[laiscnogueira]

I'm enjoying your novel very much.

Thank you a lot ;D

sarcastic humorous undertone

That's my middle name lol

your dog's picture gives me life

Snow was such a cute and chubby pup. Now he's a gigantic and clumsy 5 years old lovable Border Collie.

And really, thank you. Your story is pretty fun to read too. I have to catch up to it tho, since last week I didn't get to be here on tapas much.

[storytimebiondi]

Hello amortelito! I don't know how I missed your thread until now. I'm always happy to receive kind words (though, who isn't). I will attempt to do the same!

The Stone Gods | Tapas

[amortelito]

Yeah, I think we all need positivity from time to time. Some people think that "being real" is focus on the negative, which is only half of the truth. I adore your comic style. Is so beautiful, I happily subscribed. Also went to the other stories is only fair to review all your amazing work!!

[storytimebiondi]

Why thank you! As I've said before, I'm so happy you like them
I look forward to reading through the rest of yours! The set up was intriguing! I love stories that subvert narrative norms

[fcornelio38]

This is my first Comic I have made so any feedback will definitely be appreciated.

Left Behind :: The Beginning of the End | Tapas

[amortelito]

Hey, Good job there!!! It looks great for being your first comic. I laughed a lot. Like dude, she disinteregrated...but the pizza!! Great!

[Jabbage]

Oh gosh, if you're not completely swamped with comics, you might like to check out mine!

It's a feel-good sci-fi story (well, mostly ;D)

Earth in a Pocket | Tapas

[Emevsa]

If you feel like it we've got two.
One is a scifi fantasy that's a bit serious and has about 20ish episodes: https://m.tapas.io/series/theconstellationchronicle

The other is the complete opposite and very new: https://m.tapas.io/series/Menagerie

[amortelito]

So well made, looks very professional. I does show your passion for human and natural science. Also is so interesting that while referring to earth we get to see earthy colors browns, greens even if it is just a mention it is present in the palette of colors. <3 I will support your other comics too

[comixbubbles]

Mother of Villainy and a delusional teenage girl | Tapas

This is just starting but I would love some feedback!

[amortelito]

Verdict: Beautiful and meaningful. It is so good that you decided to make two stories that are nothing alike because that way explores with each one something the other can't. <3

[amortelito]

Your comic looks so fun!! I like that evil girl the most Like, who wouldn't want those cool clothes? As feedback, I have to say is quite hard to read some of the texts. Don't be afraid to take space from the drawing to give more space to the dialogue bubbles. Maybe in the future, you might want to print your texts and paste them, is what traditional mangakas do. Also, traditional art is great to experiment and with practice, you will be able to "clean" your lines. If you feel you messed up a dialogue or panel you can always cut a piece of blank paper and paste it on top to redraw that section instead of redrawing the entire page (Is what we did in design uni when we had to learn the basics before learning digital arts LOL) Good luck!! <3