Sorry, thread was a bit difficult to navigate and i might end up reviewing the wrong comics bu either way, here we go.
First up, @donathinfrye 's I, Necromancer
"I, Necromancer is Breaking Bad meets Dungeons and Dragons" Well the premise has me hooked.
But oh MY was this one a joy to read. It is a blend of old, gothic horror staying true to a Victorian literary style presented in the modern comic format. You've got a knack for storytelling as this felt like an adaptation of a horror classic but I'm quite pleased to see this is all your own original work. Not being a fan of big info and exposition dumps I love the way you slowly but deliberately paced the story and let it be told naturally. It's playing out very well and you've managed to get that hook, that sort of narrative that made wanted to keep going page after page. The flashbacks at time became a bit jarring, unexpected, and a bit difficult to follow but as the story progressed they became clear how they tied back to the main story.
The artwork is fairly good and fits the eerie style of the comic very well. Though I noticed a few hiccups here and there it wasn't anything that detracted too much from the story. Some facial expressions and anatomy seemed lopsided in a few panels. To make up for this there were pages and panels that were just outright beautiful and others were the facial expressions pulled through and made for a very solid page.
One of the best comic series I've come across on this website. Fine tune the art here and there and keep that story going.
9/10
Second, @dylankeefer1's Drakon Forge
...Did, did you compose that main theme? Wow dude.
This has potential. I can tell how much just yet, but it seems you have a grand scope for this story given how much work you're putting in to it. It's very manga inspired but falls a little short of being too compelling. Some things worked while others didn't. The initial father-son moment did tug at my heartstrings but the random encounter with the mugger seemed unnecessary. There are other ways to show the strength of the father and that same strength the son will have to emulate. I'd go on from there but this is the biggest issue with your comic and seems to be out of your control. No artist to continue your work from there. Which sucks because both of the previous artist's styles were fantastic! The second one especially! Unfortunately you're alone now with little content to critique. Therefore, I can't give a full review.
I can understand what you're going through, finding an artist that will do justice to this ambitious project of yours. Keep your search going and come back when you have more content for a fleshed out review. I owe you one
Finally, @ToonDoctor 's Johny Bullet
Well there was quite a lot to go through with this one. First off I'm not too big a fan of street/drag racing or cars in general so take this with a grain of salt as I focus on the art and characters. The style itself is reminiscent of newspaper comics and sets itself apart from many other comics around here. That said there are some issues. The narrative is a tad bit difficult to follow and the style and format you publish lend it more to being a one shot per page story where it has its own set conflict and resolution within that single page that works in to this bigger narrative. The way its set up now doesn't lend itself to a flowing story being told across multiple pages. It doesn't have that hook needed to pull me in to Johny's story and keep going from one page to the next which is important given how much you've uploaded. Perhaps you could condense each story beat to a single page chapter style to reduce the intimidating amount of content you have. As the story progress the story becomes a bit more compelling and the image sizes increase so they become easier to read and digest. Still the format could use some fine tuning and revision
6/10
So now I present my comic Light and Dark in to the mix. Have at it all.
