Have a comedy of slice of life comic? Share it here!

[red6_626]

Hey people!

Rules of this thread:
1. Obviously follow the Tapas Forum Guidelines
2. Share your comic!
3. Give constructive feedback
4. Before you share your comic, try and read someone else's too

Here's my comic if you're looking for a 'shower thoughts' kinda thing. I just started it a few days ago, so there isn't much to it yet.

Food For Thought | Tapas

I look forward to reading your comics! (I'll try to read as many as I can)

[BLTX]

Here's my comic, Donnie The Fighting Psychopath! I'll check yours out, and give feedback on what I can! Would you prefer feedback via private message, or just listed on here?

Tired of his oppressive government and the "shills" it has created, young Donnie has been fighting the urge to act out his fantasies of committing gruesome murders on his country's twisted, backwards people. Taking advice from his psychotic neighbor, his strange plushie, and an anonymous dream figure, Donnie is seeking the tough answers as to how he can escape the dark path he has set in life.

GENRE: Dark Comedy, Horror, Drama, Satire, Psychological Fiction, Supernatural Fiction, Fantasy.

Donnie The Fighting Psychopath | Tapas

[johnm71180]

Joy To The World | Tapas

[kitschensyngk]

My slice-of-life comic is a teeny bit different...

Nachos Con Carne | Tapas

[red6_626]

Hi BLTX,
I love Donnie the Fighting Psychopath. Donnie seems like a normal kid with depression or smth, but AJ is misguiding him into doing more evil than good. Also, I like all the dark humor sprinkled in.
To improve, you could upload in smaller chunks (only since it was so long I couldn't read it in one go.) I also noticed some tet was too small/blurry to read easily.
Other than that, I appreciate all the work you've put into planning, drawing, and uploading your comic. Definitely subbed to it. It'll take me time to get through, but I do enjoy reading it.

[BLTX]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it! In responce to the text boxes, I am well aware of the problem, and I keep trying to fix it. However, it's only really a problem with the first episode, so it shouldn't be an issue later on.

As for Food For Thought, I'm gonna say right away that the humour didn't do it for me, but I can see other people reading, and enjoying it. I think it's a nice, simple concept, and I like the messy, but stylized drawing style. For me, I think it works as a nice, short, relaxing read. Also, it actually did get me thinking about things like how having alot of wine is considered classy. So overall, it wasn't too bad, and I can see other people enjoying it.

[red6_626]

I'm glad the text boxes are only a problem in the first episode.

And no sweat on the humor. I have a weird sense of humor that's not for everyone. It's good that it got you thinking though!

[red6_626]

hi johnm,
Joy to the World is absolutely hilarious! This is certainly a hidden gem. I can't wait to keep reading it and catch up to where you're working at.

[red6_626]

hi kitschensyngk
I enjoyed reading Nachos Con Carne. I'm not sure how the title is relevant to the plot yet, but I'm sure I'll figure it out soon-ish. It took a few pages to get to the good stuff, but when I got there, it was worth it. I can't stop reading it. I subbed for sure! Well done

[powerplantanimations]

I promised myself that I wasn't going to go on these types of threads, but luckily yours is interesting enough to set itself apart. Here's my comic:

That Stick Figure Isekai | Tapas

[sushy00]

Love finding more slice of life/comedy/short comics

Here is mine:

https://tapas.io/series/sushy/

[powerplantanimations]

Btw have you thought about making in a scrolling format? Like cutting them apart and just increasing their size and all that? Also cutting apart panels so things can be bite-sized? Because you'll get a lot of material that way instead of just doing it all in one comic.

[BLTX]

I'm not sure entirly what you mean, but I've never really wanted to adapt the scrolling format. Of course I've considered the advantages to it, but I honeslty just really like the way it looks as is, as I really do prefer to have it layed out like a traditional comic book. Plus, I feel it just allows for more panels and sequences to better illustrate what's going on, and it's not something I want to give up, because I often need all the panels I can get.

That being said, I'm not entirely sure how I would adapt the scrolling style, and exactly what I'd have to lose, so it's not entirely out of the realm of possibilities. However, I also don't like making any major changes to the episodes upon release.

[pinxfoxx]

Hi,
I have a slice of life comic called Witchy Life. It's about a witch named Morgan, who is accompanied by her magic hat Hat. It is a short strip comic with a bit of comedy about some day to day stuff. Morgan is ace, introverted, dyslexic, so some updates are themed around these topics.

Witchy Life | Tapas

[afuji]

Hi everyone! Here are some little comics bout my life, Easy Breezy

Easy Breezy | Tapas

[kitschensyngk]

It isn't.

It's an homage to comics like Charles Schulz's Peanuts and Kiyohiko Azuma's Azumanga Daioh, in that they're kid-centered and have titles that have nothing to do with anything in the story.

[red6_626]

Oh, poor Naota/John. I enjoyed your comic and am waiting for the next ep! I never thought a stick figure comic could be so entertaining and yet here we are... Great job!

[red6_626]

pinkxfoxx, I love the art style and your method of storytelling. And Pjor the hamster is an absolute character! I subbed to hear what happens to Pjor next

[red6_626]

hi afuji. i liked reading Easy Breezy. Each episode was short, but punchy (with comedic poses, jokes, and whatnot). I also like your art style. It's so clean!

[red6_626]

oh how interesting! Thats a cool concept. i like it.