Okay, now first of all I don't understand where are you going with it =) You start with the artblock episode, then go to comic, then The Reality Variable, which again has nothing to do with the comic.
It is quite boring to read a lot of text about nothing 80% of the time, looking just straight at the same faces ctrl+c/ctrl+v all the time. Sooooomething of the plot actually happened only in episode 10, then again two dudes talking about... something? I'm not really sure if you are using some kind of inside jokes or I just miss the point of their talking.
You could сut the amount of you episodes in half and we still won't miss anything. If you want to say something, just say it. Do you have any plot aside of "two dudes smacked a guy and he lost 10 years of memory"? If you do, start unwrapping it =) Also, make these guys DO something, they talk a lot and doing nothing at all, they at least should walk, drink, react in a lot of ways.