Thank you so much for a critique, I really appreciate it! Yeah, I agree. Unfortunately, speech bubbles are my weakness xd But I will try make them better in chapter 3 ( because I drew chapter 2 about year ago ). Also, I'm actually thinking of changing the format to a 1 page per episode like yours . You see, I draw my comic in a traditional way, because I used to post this comic also on DA and to be fair, I prefer the classic way. I just think the format I post here is more suitable, because of how this site works. So basically I'm making a normal comic page and then editing it to the way it is. BUT since editing it takes a bit of time and now with the way I'm making pages in chapter 3 will probably take even longer I might as well start to posting in the way like you do
Anyway, I like your comic. It has great humour Thanks a lot for sharing!