Help me in my first step!

artdisk007 2023-09-09 13:22:00 UTC #1

Hello everyone, I'm ArtDisk. New to tapas.
Presently, my dashboard showed me a criteria to reach 25 subs. Don't know what's gonna happen after that.
So, pretty please... Help my book reach 25 subs.
I'll give you the contents of it. Almost done with the prologue.

Book: Darkened Daylight
Synopsis: [I died more than once, but I never reached heaven. Nor did I reach hell. Who is tampering with my destiny?
Everytime I die, I am reborn elsewhere. Even then, I remained second to none. Just who is reincarnating me?]
...
"We finally meet, young lad!"
"!!!!"
The sudden voice that altered the turn of events made Adrona spellbound.
"No need to be afraid my dear young lad. Cause you are now about to inherit 'Darkened Daylight', a power that is feared by both life and afterlife!"
...
Adrona was freed from his misfortune by the 'Dark Reigner' who is known to be an origin entity and thus began his new journey in succeeding the 'Darkened Daylight', a power that reigns over the abyss.

Disclaimer: There are also pictures here and there. I did so not to bore the readers.

Artist3o 2023-09-09 13:28:14 UTC #2

i subbed @artdisk007
here is the link of the novel i just started as well
hope you reach your goal

rainwang 2023-09-09 14:06:53 UTC #3

subbed! here's mine (i hope u like it enough to subscribe too <3):

Hi! My work, Chasing Grief, just got updated this week! It's the second to the last chapter of the third part, so I hope it's good :)) Chasing Grief is about a woman navigating her feelings of grief and loss after losing her love. She goes through life, death, and in between to look for answers to her questions, and to maybe reconcile with her love. Please give it a shot! I promise it's worth it <3

Gladoilus 2023-09-09 14:07:08 UTC #4

It doesn’t mean anything yet as far as I have researched, it will go up to 100 which will be your next milestone and at 100 you can start earning money for it

Gladoilus 2023-09-09 14:07:59 UTC #5

Innocynce 2023-09-09 14:11:36 UTC #6

Would you post a link from here? I have trouble navigating the site

artdisk007 2023-09-09 14:12:32 UTC #7

missros_e 2023-09-09 20:02:34 UTC #8

Edit - I'm already subscribed to your novel!

I will subscribe and have a look when I can, it would help if you shared a link to your novel for people to access easily. Feel free to have a look at my work and subscribe to any you like, here is my novel which is a romance between demons and vampires.

This is also my first comic.

A young Cowfish named Chips journey in learning about the endangered species he shares an ocean with and plastic pollution.

This is my completed novel. A romance between a merman and a human.

Lastly, a vampire/human/werewolf romance/love triangle.

Kristin is happy with the quiet life she leads but then a stranger enters her life and turns it upside down.

Pixei 2023-09-10 04:55:01 UTC #9

Hey! I draw illustrations for my webnovel too!

I checked your novel out. I really like your art! I subbed cause I'm excited see what more you draw. If you'd like to see mine, feel free to check mine out too! I noticed that both are stories seem to have some similarities.

Here's a breif synopsis of BLACK OUT:
Chirin used to live in Terra Firma, but after a serious of forgotten events, he is thrown off the edge of the world and into the Abyss: A world dominated by creatures of desire and subservience, slaves in pursuit of their own self-interests and survival. No matter what it takes, Chirin must travel home. Will he make it back, or will he lose his heart to the Abyss?

imzaccharus 2023-09-10 05:00:22 UTC #10

Hey Art! I just started publishing my first-ever web novel: Eternia Saga. I would love to swap honest reviews if you would be willing to do the same for me!

Link: https://tapas.io/series/Zaccharus-Eternia-Saga
Genres: fantasy, war, romance, mystery, thriller

There are only 6 chapters out at this moment. So please let me know how you feel about the story thus far!

I am willing to review 10 of your chapters. So, if this seems acceptable to you, please reply to this thread and let me know!

Edit- Subbed!

Keep writing and keep grinding! Cheers!

Gladoilus 2023-09-10 11:28:44 UTC #11

artdisk007 2023-09-10 14:10:00 UTC #12

Hey, I read the first chapter.
Buddy, you took it too easily. I mean, I too did the same in the past. Later, when I got in touch with a senior writer, he told me not to write half-assedly.
Don't take it wrongly. He advised me to make descriptions on the kind of clothes people are wearing in a scene. Their facial expressions, and depth of the scenery.
What I've read was child's play. You must make the readers excited. Because, they imagine the scene which they're reading in their imaginations.
You used children and knights in the scene. But try to come up with a way of describing their infrastructure.

imzaccharus 2023-09-10 16:42:38 UTC #13

Ahh I'll try to put more imagery into my scenes from next time! I got similar feedback from a senior writer before as well and I wanted to make sure that this time I flesh out my scenes better. However, I just wanted to put something out to show to myself that I actually wrote something. I will try harder from now on!

Thanks for the feedback, mate! I'd love to hear your thoughts on the plot as well! Also, I'm going to review your story soon! A formal review/collection swap would be unbelievable! Again, thank you for taking the time to help me out!