Thanks for taking the time to do this! I'd really appreciate an honest first impression of my comic since I don't exactly have a whole lot of experience with writing stories.
Just finished giving yours a look and it seems pretty interesting so far! The art is really eye catching and the plot seems to be moving at a good pace. The first chapter especially did a great job setting the tone of what to expect. I think the text bubbles are a little messy (in terms of the line work), but that's really my only complaint. Also, I'd have to say that my favourite characters so far is red Mike Wazowski.